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Lyn Piton2005.01.28 - 03:31AM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
What a great story! I love your Harry, and his Parseltongue spell in this is really interesting. I didn't think Sev's actions were freaky--a little frightening, maybe, but understandable. He and Hermione are just so cute together! I liked her book on pleasing her wizard, because of course she would go straight to a book. :) Can't wait to see what happens next! --Piton

Author's Response: lol thanks! more up in a bit.. sev and harry will have a little confrontation of sorts

scully_m_2005.01.28 - 02:54AM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
We love the story and you write so well... it is the effort that counts... I say your rep is still very much in place.

Author's Response: thnx so much! more up soon

kirien2005.01.28 - 02:48AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
brava. i'm glad you've made Harry Hermione's second. just thinking about "dark harry" gives me the chills, he would truly be voldy's heir if he ever turned...

Author's Response: thanks! and yes indeed! more up soon

Lana Manckir2005.01.28 - 02:47AM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
I think Severus' actions are very in character actually. He never had a relationship, and never felt the need to protect a person as he does Hermione. He is after all an ex-DE, he has a temper and absolutely no experience in loving someone. It's expected from a man with such passion and strong personality to flip at the thought of another man marking his woman. But at the end, the very ability to realize his mistakes that brought him to the light, was what made him change his actions in the last minute. He had a rough life and a terrible father. I imagine it would take time for him to control his emotions in that area. You've done a wonderful job and the chapter was very emotional and intense. Can't possibly wait for more updates ;-)

Author's Response: thanks so much, lana! next chapt should be up today at some point... you are right on the money of course. i'm glad you saw it the way i did.

justme2005.01.28 - 01:03AM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
I can see how Severus reacted so violently to the scent that reminded him of the Dark Lord.... and I just LOVE how he adores her!!!! please update again soon!!!!!

Author's Response: more soon! thanks a bunch... i think that scent just brought up some bad memories

Selene2005.01.27 - 09:15PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
aww...poor sevvy, no wait, poor harry when sev gets to him :D lovin it, can't wait for more

Author's Response: thanks so much! their confrontation is up next

Drake2005.01.27 - 09:10PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
So, is Mione gonna marry him, or what?

Author's Response: she will... he needs to go get the ring... cheers

blaze_of_fae2005.01.27 - 07:52PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
yay, another great chapter...keep um coming! I think that you tapped into sev's temper just right!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i appreciated that

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