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Reviews for The Succubus

Betz2005.01.10 - 09:15PM11: Chapter ElevenSigned
So Hermione goes on potions, introduces Seversu to her parents and we find out about the succubus injury. Cool! This story is progressing nicely. Can;t wait to see how Severus broaches the subject of children with her.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Teehee... We'll have this posted tomorrow!

HiddenAllusion2005.01.10 - 09:09PM10: Chapter TenSigned
Still as interesting as ever! You post faster than I can keep up, which is new for me... and very, very good. As always, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for this chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Still a little but to go here, but I'll keep posting them all the same until it's completed.

Fictionlover_322005.01.10 - 08:00PM10: Chapter TenSigned
Hey there! I don't remember if I left a review or not, but here it is, just in case I didn't. I love how the story is progressing! Of course it was a great start from the begining and it's getting more better by the minute! I like the fact that this fic is based on originality, if goes to show how creative you are, which I'm grateful. I also enjoy seeing Snape being so mellow and open-minded in all this. Knowing his personality, I half expected him to be exremely cranky and do the denail stuff that he usually do. But instead, he's adjusting fairly well. He's still the snarky, sexy bastard(sigh) but he's not being a bitch about his situation. Also love how you update so frequently. Can't wait for the next installment! Update soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: Yes, he is being a good chap about it all. I think deep down he might have been tired of being alone! I did like him to resist some, but not so much as to hold up the story.. I always scream at em to get it on!!!! more soon. Thanks again!

Mouse2005.01.10 - 07:32PM10: Chapter TenSigned
That was so GREAT! Whaaahooo!!! lol. I loved it, from start to finish. :D I'm so glad to hear there are more chapters. You explained everything beautifully. Very good girlie. :) I'll check back later on tonight and see if you gave us another chapter. :D

Author's Response: thank you much!! it should be up by then. i hope lol

queenp2005.01.10 - 06:34PM10: Chapter TenSigned
OK, the afternoon delight was nice. I was impressed by the dream scenes. They were well written. Is the dream wound going to end up playing a part in the future? It could be an interesting twist... They should have some good/long/deep conversations. You mentioned the upcoming discussions including pregnancy potions--this needs to be very soon...after all nothing has been mentioned about it yet...Also, will we see Hermione's parents being informed of the situation? If so, how will they react? Am loving the story. Please update again soon...*looking for more chocolate--damn the kid ate it. Looking for keys to go to store to get more for authorial incentives*

Author's Response: Somewhat, they will. The next chapter should have been up by now. Dang. Ah well. They've been great about posting them quickly so far. Hermione's parents won't be until 2 more chaps. She's not ready for them to know yet. The potions and all that good stuff will be in the next chapter. Thanks for posting!!

Maggie2005.01.10 - 05:46PM10: Chapter TenSigned
Alright, well men are weaker when it comes to that?????

Author's Response: She meant only that she could likely make him aroused easier than it would be to make a woman aroused.

tjbaby2005.01.10 - 04:52PM10: Chapter TenSigned
nice to see they have conquered together. Severus being a Capricorn makes total sense and seeing as I am one, I may be somewhat biased, but you have made him here a wonderfully complex being and totally what I would expect of Capricorn Severus. Withholding emotional information because it's too soon in this relationship - very true to form.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate that. More should be up shortly.

pickles2005.01.10 - 04:46PM10: Chapter TenSigned
thank you for updating. that was a close call til the end.

Author's Response: uh huh. that evil wench wanted some sevvie! lol

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