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Guinnevere2005.10.27 - 09:10PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Yep. Bella is the 'junior' snake! Your set up was subtle, but it seemed like a logical plan to me. What I didn't see coming was Harry's excellent and highly moral statement of his reasons, and the fact that Dumbledore approved. Well done.

I'm a dedicated HG/SS shipper (didn't take long to convert me!), but I do love Harry. He's an adorable young man, and although this story has him up to his green eyes in angst, he's still a hero through and through.

Author's Response: Harry's trying to be different, and I hoped his explanation would soothe readers. Most feel she should have been "terminated." I'm happy you still like Harry. Thanks!

Guinnevere2005.10.27 - 08:36PM45: Chapter Forty FiveSigned
I have some suspicions about that, but in the interest of avoiding spoilers I'll keep them to myself. I'll just keep reading, and see if my conjecture is right! The plot thickens -- good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews by the way.

Rave_n12005.10.27 - 04:20PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Wonderful Story. I can't wait for part 2!!!

Author's Response: thank you! I'm currently working on it!

Guinnevere2005.10.26 - 09:15PM37: Chapter Thirty SevenSigned
"I’ve been sleepy, tired, and grumpy for just over a week now."

Before that, was she Happy, Dopey and Sneezy? heh! (Sorry, I couldn't resist.)

This is a lovely chapter. I can't imagine being in love with a man and not wanting to have a child with him, and to my mind, Hermione would have the same attitude. I'm so glad that in your story Severus is thrilled about it too.

Author's Response: hahaha... i'm cracking up here. I agree about the child thing! :)

Danu2005.10.26 - 03:55AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
::claps:: I love happy endings. Especially after all the bumps and twists and turns Severus and Hermione had to go through. Wonderful job, can't wait to read Part Two.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll work with part 2 soon.Cheers

Guinnevere2005.10.26 - 01:27AM31: Chapter Thirty OneSigned
Whew! There for awhile I was afraid... well, you know. This chapter was thrilling, not squicky. Thank you!

Author's Response: I tried to stay away from the squick... hehe! You're very welcome.

Guinnevere2005.10.26 - 12:57AM30: Chapter ThirtySigned
Yes, Bella is an entire 'nut factory' all by herself, and the lot of them are definitely more than a few sandwiches short of a picnic!

Author's Response: She is. I've plans for Bella in the sequel that will prove she has a small amount of redeeming qualities if nothing else. Big Grin.

Guinnevere2005.10.26 - 12:19AM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
Well it's true, Percy hasn't been at all prominent in the books - he's the equivalent of a red-shirt on Star Trek, and we all know what always happened to them! But Luna Lovegood? I actually like that eccentric little doll-baby! How awful, what happened to her! *sniff* - *sob*

Author's Response: Yep, poor Luna! She'll be all right though. Things will sort out. Percy still holds no dear place in my heart. Wanker, I say.

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