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| pickles | 2005.02.14 - 12:48PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| Almost forgot to leave you something... Here's a box of chocolates and roses of every color. Thank you for a wonderful story Author's Response: yay!! Happy Valentine's day... sends candies your way | |||
| grill | 2005.02.14 - 12:46PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| Very nice chapter! I'm so glad Luna's still with us... Though I can't even begin to imagine how horrible it'll be to be in a position like that. Hopefully Harry'll be able to fool Bellatrix, right? The wedding ceremony was really nice; I can understand Snape is happy to be able to call someone his wife! ;) Now, what about Hermione's parents? She'll have to tell them, right? Can't wait for that conversation...! Not to mention the consummation of the wedding! Should be brilliant, shouldn't it? ;) As always... Percy's funeral was touching, and I really enjoyed that little bit about Lucius (and Narcissa). Fun how Draco and Ron seem to really befriend one another...! Keep it coming, luv! Author's Response: yeah, i'd say it sucks to be luna. poor doll. harry should hook her up somehow. yep, the parents will be told soon (grins). hehe lemons up next! yay! I'm glad you liked the lucius/narcissa portion. I thought he deserved that as well. Poor percy and his family. i was hoping to portray ron and ginny's thoughts realistically. I wonder if draco isnt really crushing on ron? hehe... seems that way at times. more up soon! | |||
| pickles | 2005.02.14 - 12:29PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| Thank you for the EXTRA LONG chapter. It was sad happy hopeful. Thank you so much for the new chapter. Now I must go an prepare for hubby's birthday today. Happy Valentine's Day!! Today is Medicdaddy's birthday too. Author's Response: Well Happy Bday to him!! Cheers! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Hope it wasn't too long.. hehe | |||
| Winna | 2005.02.14 - 12:06PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| This was a very touching chapter. The shift from Severus & Hermione to Percy's funeral was rather jarring, although I got the impression that was intentional. I really liked the scene with Lucius and Narcissa; I like to believe they are truely in love in canon, too. Not a big fan of wedding scenes (I didn't even like my own wedding) but this one was OK. Looking forward to updates... Author's Response: Thanks! Nothing like a bit of emotions to put a bite of reality on things. I wanted to put some more of Narcissa in there, and i had portrayed her ealier as a bit of a flake, so I figured i would try to rectify that some by showing she does care beneath it all. I usually skim over wedding scenes myself, and my own wedding was long and went on and on... lol... more up soon. cheers! | |||
| Mysticdarkraven | 2005.02.14 - 12:04PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| I loved this chapter, and I'm glad that there married. I hope that Harry can help Luna out....Great post, please post again soon. Thanks. Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. I think luna will be okay eventually. | |||
| Fictionlover_32 | 2005.02.14 - 11:44AM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| What a beautiful wedding! I love the vows they exchanted at the alter. It's was so romantic! Now it's got me thinking of marriage! I'm also relieved that Lucius is alive. I feel sad that he may not be able to walk again, but I know he'll make it through. After all, he has Draco and severus and other people who care about him. And Luna.....hope she never loses any hope. With Harry's plan, maybe she'll have a chance to live again. And Ron is strong, he'll make it also. I noticed that Ron have matured a lot in this fic. I think it's mostly due to what happened with Luna and the whole situation. I'm actually proud of him. I feel so happy for our couple! I think that since they're married, Hermione or Severus will triumph over the incubus, if it ever visits them! I feel good things will come to them, sooner or later. Looking very foward to the lemons in the next chapter! Cheers! Author's Response: thanks, doll! lucius will be all right. I'm just glad that he realizes how Narcissa truly feels. Luna will hopefully be able to pull through. Harry's plan has merit. I think when Ron landed Luna, it began to change him, and sometimes a slap in the face by reality does a bit to open your eyes. The incubus doesnt stand a chance hehe. yummy lemons, i say! | |||
| lovethelab | 2005.02.14 - 11:26AM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| I really liked the wedding scene - very nice symbolism. I always enjoyed those sorts of things - had some at my own wedding, but I guess most eveyone does. With that preview in your author's note, how can I be anything except exicted about the next chapter - Lemons indeed!! I just hope that Severus can "get to" Hermione before the Incubus does! Author's Response: muahahahah... i think he will, and i wonder how the poor little incubus is going to deal with that! haha! i'm glad you liked the wedding. I wanted to add in some meaningful things. i love symbolism! and even more, i love lemons! working on those now (for the next chap) heehee | |||
| Betz | 2005.02.14 - 11:13AM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
| That was a lovely and meaningful ceremony, truly lovely. So sweet. Lots of nice symbolism. I'm glad to know Luna is still stuck inside, at there there is a soul still there. Another wonderful chapter. Author's Response: thanks doll! i appreciate the review! they'll try what they can to help her. poor doll hehe cheers! | |||
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