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Armor2005.02.21 - 03:41AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
I can't believe I didn't see this chapter. Okay, I love it but I can't help I don't like the part of the crystal and a public consummation. Ok, I know that everyone knows what you do during your wedding night... But I think it's very personal, they don't have to know when !
as for the meeting between Bella and Harry... I was sure Bella was the favourite mistress of Voldemort (hey, she loves power not the guy). I wonder how Harry will break her.

Author's Response: i know~ brrrr~ just the thought of peeps knowing what you are doing! lol... yikes! that's not as bad as in the old days though. they used to watch and after they'd hold up the bloodied bed sheet! lol.. yuk eh? more up soon with harry and bella! hehe cheers

SidneySnape2005.02.20 - 05:34PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
this has me on the edge of my seat. can't wait til the next update. I think the Incubus/Succubus is going to go after Harry. I guess I wil have to wait and find out. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: i'm glad you are enjoying it. i'll have a pretty good section on the incubus as it explains who he can choose and why. it's pretty interesting hehe thanks

Rainbow2005.02.19 - 11:32AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
The bit with the incubus/succubus confused me. Did it mean that there was someone else Hermione could be with, or someone else it could be with?

Author's Response: oh sorry. someone else that it could be with (and have a powerful child). So, i think the spirit is afraid that she will eventually rebuff him and he's making plans to move along. Just so happens the powerful wizard is someone that fancies hermione. you can email me if you'd like, and i can try to explain it better. i will touch upon it in the next chapter as well though

Loosepen2005.02.18 - 10:26PM1: Chapter OneSigned
Great chapter- this story's so addictive I had to print the damn thing out and take it to school with me...and of course I was mocked for having dirty fanfic, but who doesnt, eh? I really hope Hermione ends up pregnant, since Pomfrey's potion should interfere with her contraceptive potion. *crosses fingers* I hope there's another chapter for me to read tomorrow!!!

Author's Response: ahahhaha!! i feel honored to have mah dirty fanfic at school hehe! the next chapter is not done yet.. so sorry! but it will be up tomorrow (just not in the morning... :( sorry) I'm pretty sure she will be! hehe cheers

Lana Manckir2005.02.18 - 03:24PM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Another fantastic chapter! I was wondering what's up with Harry since he started using a lot of dark magic, it seems to be going out of control. Oh and I can't wait to see the stupid Incubus find out his plans are useless and finally Draco... I am not a fan of slash, especially when it comes to Severus but other characters seem to be kind of endearing LOL I would like to see Draco giving in to his desire and Ron accepting it. Maybe Ron unconsciously fancies Draco, I mean, he seems to enjoy Draco's company too. Who knows, right?

Author's Response: it's possible (ron/ draco). we shall see.. muahahaha. i'm glad you liked this chapter. harry will be working with his 'issues' in the next chapter. i'm sort of having a bit of problems writing that part, so I skipped over to finish up libertine instead. to kind of give me a little breather, but i promise this will be up tomorrow some time. cheers!!

Terra of Slytherin2005.02.18 - 10:47AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Ugh! You... you.. witch! LOL... Actually I loved the chapter, but hated the ending...lol Though I think Harry and Bella would do good together... Perish the Thought! Also YAY for Draco thinking Slashy thoughts of Ron! ~Terra

Author's Response: Evil Witch of the South nods politely at her acknowledgement. more up soon dearest! i think harry/bella is a bit hot ((sshh)) dont tell the harry/ginny peeps. And, I do like the thought of Draco liking Ron 'in 'that' way... more up on all of that soon, thanks, doll!

Winna2005.02.18 - 08:23AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Whoa! That incubus is pretty tenacious. Then again, so is squicky old Bella. How will Harry resist either one??!!??

Author's Response: hehee... more up soon!! cheers, doll.. muahahaha

brujahah2005.02.18 - 05:12AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Ahhh! I can't wait for the next chapter! There was one thing I found funny, and that was Hermione saying she didn't want to start school on a Friday. She sure has changed from her days as a student to say something like that! I love where this story is going and am enjoying it immensely.

Author's Response: she has changed, hasnt she? for the better i think. I guess it's all the stress from the happenings as of late. She might not be ready to get back to the grind yet. I'm so glad you are liking the story! woohooo.. more up soon cheers

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