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Armor2005.03.11 - 12:59PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
I love your dark Harry and the return of Professor Snape !!! lol But where is Rolanda ? Did she vanish in the sky on a spelled broomstick ? lol.

Author's Response: teehee.. funny you should mention rolanda!! she'll be in the next chapter and we'll see an explanation about her absence! more up soon! thanks!!

Winna2005.03.11 - 12:04PM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
Hurray! Dark!Harry returns! I kind of thought the snakes would realise someone was in the Chamber. I hope Ron & Luna are the couple in question. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: those sneaky snakes! hehe... i've started messing with the next bit.. interesting... ooh sorry! not luna and ron! more up soon

ancientgirl2005.03.11 - 11:11AM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
LOL, was that Draco/Ron conversation supposed to clear things up? That was funy, but now funny. Clear but now clear. I can't stop laughing, those two are nuts. But, seriously, I think they feel more for each other than they are willing to admit to each other or themselves. Great stuff, and yummy shower lemon.

Author's Response: thanks, doll! Glad you liked it. Ron / Draco = silly arses. WEll, that settled nothing. ahahaha... more up soon!!

yutamiyu2005.03.11 - 11:02AM41: Chapter Forty OneSigned
Hmm. Interesting. It's nice to see the return of the lemons...I mean Dark!Harry. Of course I mean Dark!Harry. ::coughs:: In any event, update again soon, and I'm glad your testing turned out all right. How many more chapters do you foresee for this story?

Author's Response: lol.. i was thinking that it would end at forty, but I don't know what happened. It keeps growing. Really though, I would like to try for 5 more chapters..tops... if that. I'm glad to see you are still reading, and I've had a read of your latest chapter! excellent work!

illnevertell2005.03.11 - 09:18AM9: Chapter NineSigned
I really love where this story is going! It has just the right amount of insecurity and a subtle comfort level to be more realistic than most stories. Usually after they become intimate Severus turns into a big mush. I am really looking forward to reading more. Great so far. Jaimie

Author's Response: Thanks! I dont really care for a mushy Severus, so I hope to try to keep him a bit.. 'stern'. I dont think that's the right word! lol, but you know what i mean. more up soon! cheers and thanks

Dover_witchy2005.03.11 - 05:50AM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
I think maybe, there should be a little added on Minerva and Albus' relationship. Some kissing perhaps i dont know just little things. I wouldnt get lemony with it cuz I dunno seems umm Gross LOL. muwahahaha! Good Good liking that Harry and Sev are becoming close thats a plus! And who the fuck is bellatrix Im lost on that, can you refer me somewhere so I can update or give me a lil description or something >blush
Author's Response: most peeps aren't really interested in minerva / albus.. lol... usually just knowing they are a couple is enough hahahaha..... Bella is an old Death Eater. I'll send you some messages on yahoo so you can go check her out hehe

Dover_witchy2005.03.11 - 05:11AM22: Chapter Twenty TwoSigned
Going great....However I gotta say that maybe Beta Nay needs a Beta to lol. There were a few lil typos and such above noting that one couldnt comprehend. But I figured Ive been giving you such great reviews latley better deflate that ego balloon a little. Muwahahahahahahaha. Great writing luv! -Cheers! -peace ~*jess

Author's Response: Oy!! You're supposed to send me an instant message and tell me what chapter and where.. hahahahaha. I copied nay your message though. lol teehee..

illnevertell2005.03.10 - 05:24PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Simply fantastic so far!!! Very, very original. I have read hundreds of H.P. fan fics and this is the first I have come across with this story line. Absolutely fascinating read! * Kudos* Jaimie

Author's Response: thanks so much. I'm uploading the next chapter this evening! cheers! i'm glad you like it

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