Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In |
Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions

Reviews for The Succubus

KarlaMarie2005.01.12 - 05:04AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
why did you stop it there.... keep going...

Author's Response: more today!

Mouse2005.01.12 - 03:34AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
OMG. I don't know who I feel more sorry for. Him for having one of his worst nightmares, or her for having to go through it on the side lines if you will. :( How very sad for both of them. I didn't mind the potion brewing, especially the lemony goodness after wards. I liked the drinking game too, I will never look at charades the same way again, it was very funny. lol.

Author's Response: sad but not so bad they can't work through it. yes, i feel like making a game of charades as well... lol, now to find some Firewhisky

Arwen9992005.01.12 - 02:24AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Nice chapter! Yes, Severus is a bit wicked, but it's because of his dream. Everyone makes strange dreams. Ok, not obligatory that kind of dreams ^^, but since it's the refuge of pulsions... the problematic thing is when you dream and do what you did in your dream, in the "awaken life" (hey, what a long sentence!). But who has ever been visited by a succubus? Oh, nice job! Now, I'm going to sleep. And please, no incubus! ^^

Author's Response: lol... i tell you. i do some crazy $%@$^ in my dreams sometimes. once i was sword fighting with someone..hubby was like wtf? come back to bed... hehehe

fresh82005.01.12 - 02:11AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
whoa. update.

Author's Response: lol! right then... more today

uncreative872005.01.12 - 02:02AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
I must say that you have a wonderful thing going with this story and that I simply lovve you for updating so often :) I look forward to another instalment

Author's Response: thanks! more up today

Arwen9992005.01.12 - 01:50AM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Ok, I'm very tired, but I wanted to review first. I loved this chapter, I'm glad to know (finally) about the succubus, and I definitely want to read chapter 13 before going to bed. General opinion about chapter 12: very good! Interesting discussion about children!

Author's Response: thank you much. i thought kid talk cute too.. and he was like... why, i thought no such thing... liar! lol

pickles2005.01.12 - 01:17AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Not boring at all. thank you for updating. soon it will be time to take the potion and take care of that scratch.

Author's Response: yeppers....more chaps today!

Betz2005.01.12 - 01:08AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Poor Seviekins! At least he didn't try to give her a right cross in her dreams. Another good chapter!

Author's Response: thanks doll

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 [Next]


Disclaimers
Terms of Use
Credits

Ashwinder
A Severus Snape/Hermione Granger archive in the Harry Potter universe

Copyright © 2003-2019 Sycophant Hex
All rights reserved