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Reviews for The Succubus

ancientgirl2005.01.11 - 05:22PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
LOL, Albus is such a gossip! Little by little I can see he's sort of admitting to himself his own feelings. Great chapter. I'm thinking these things Severus will become in his dreams might be a reflection of what he used to be. That could be pretty scary. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Uhhuh...Albus/Minerva..lol Yep, Severus can and used to be a scary fellow..quite close, you are

Gia2005.01.11 - 05:15PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Wonderful plot development! I'm glad to see the characterization staying close to home. You're really developing the relationship and the story at a great. pace;. Thank you for the frequent updates!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter will be up soon! I think they are coming along nicely as well even though it's only be a short amount of time

tjbaby2005.01.11 - 04:06PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned

"our chambers" indeed! Well, well who would have thought that snarky ol' Professor would have succumbed so early? (me! me! me!) Severus would have been worried about Hermione's thoughts if he's any true Capricorn as they tend to worry about how others see them and since he had obviously been worried since Lucius had put it down, it stands to reason that he would worry Hermione might think the same way.

My husband says that you have captured the 'maleness' of his thoughts rather well! And we loved the book on wifely etiquette! Reminds me of Mrs Beeton's household hints. Very old book (100yrs or so) and has all these so-called hints on how to preform being a wife and how to correctly entertain guests! The light bantering is very nice. Very true to a new relationship. After all it is the initial way of showing affection. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: Oh kewl! Too funny! The book was my ploy to sneak that phrase in about him wanting a wife and not a house elf. lol Thanks so much for the review. You've made my day! More up later this evening. Tell the hubby thanks as well.

LariLee2005.01.11 - 03:57PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Again, Southern, I'm hooked on this story. I've always thought Severus was embarassed about being poor. And I think in his dreams, he'll be a Death Eater.
~Lisa

Author's Response: a little taste of his dream in the next chapter! big grin! thanks for the reviews!

pickles2005.01.11 - 03:47PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
thank you for updating... another marvelous chapter... enjoying very much... fred/george are so ornery... love the boys dearly though... have a good week

Author's Response: The twins are some prats, but like you, i love them! In fact, I love writing the Weasleys. hehe.. more this evening. Thanks! Have a good one.

Winna2005.01.11 - 03:44PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
I just realised I haven't reviewed after reading - shame on me! This is a great story. I really like the incubus/succubus idea, and I'm intrigued to see what Severus' dreams are like. Thanks for speedy updates!

Author's Response: Not a problem! Thanks though! A little dip into his dream in the next chapter

Gardengrrl132005.01.11 - 03:42PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Keep it coming! (no pun intended) You update quickly and are on your way to being at the top of my list for that! GG

Author's Response: LOL! Thank so much. More this evening. :)

Betz2005.01.11 - 03:27PM12: Chapter TwelveSigned
Another fine chapter. Can't wait to see how Severus fairs when meeting the potential future in-laws. LOVE these fast updates.

Author's Response: LOL. More this evening as well. We'll see what the Grangers have to say!

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