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beaweasley22008.03.20 - 04:52PM32: Chapter Thirty TwoSigned
What a chapter! It's interesting that Ginny is still emotionally connected with Harry, that's gonna make thier sexlife...hum! I'm really glad about Stuart, I want him to get better. Stebbins was a surprising loop - and possibly he can be turned to the good side and get out of all this mess. Poor sob. and I really feel for Luna, my gods I hope she hangs on. Harry is still frightening, but Severus - I knew he'd come in blazing! Hazar and eeks at the same time! geeze so much in this chaper and I really feel pulled to the next just to see what's coming!!!

beaweasley22008.03.20 - 03:29PM31: Chapter Thirty OneSigned
Whew, I was cringing for both Hermione and Draco. The plans that were hatched out for thtem and the abuse... I love how you wrote out Harry's entrance and his 'snake' Nagini - it's all just soo errie and chilling. Especially his likeing the feelings of dominance and power. *exhale s l o w l y* another 10++

beaweasley22008.03.20 - 02:29PM30: Chapter ThirtySigned
I just knew that this abduction was eminent! YEAH! When Harry gets there all Hades will break out! Harry can use the 'New Mark' to summon Severus and Lucius, proving thier loyality and really make Bella go nuts!!! Oh this is BRILLIANT!!!! 10+

beaweasley22008.03.20 - 01:19PM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
OH, why does Harry changing the Dark Mark remind me of Severus's deam with the Lord Potter thing? *shivers with a chill down my spine* I mean I love the fact that Harry is so strong, speaks Parseltongue and can literally change the Dark Mark into his own sign - even the ones on the Death Eater's arms - but it's so foreboding! And LUNA, my Loony Luna Lovegood! Please say that either Hermione or Severus finds a way to save her!!! Pleasssssse! I feel bad about Precy, (course I laways thought of him as a prat) but not Luna!!

beaweasley22008.03.20 - 12:15PM28: Chapter Twenty EightSigned
and the plans are set in place... Too cool, Severus and Lucius do seem to have a bit of it right and the safety precations you've made up - but still I dunno, Hermione and Draco - they are still in trouble. I'm really gald for some reason that Stewrt isn't realy a bad guy. He may be a bit arrogrant, but he seemed okay. I just hope that Marietta's gona get it! and I hope it's Severus who does!

beaweasley22008.03.20 - 11:21AM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Oh, Severus - he's mean leaving her with the female equevelant of 'blue balls!' I'd be upset like Hermione, too. Silly girl, that Marietta - Draco's a 17 year old boy - 17 year old boys don't turn down blow jobs! Sex, maybe, but not a free blow job! Was it Bella who taught Draco how to fight off the Imperous? Or his dad/mum? Maybe Uncle Sev? I'm just really curious. He should teach the others hoe too. great chapter

beaweasley22008.03.18 - 07:49PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
Oh, my gods, I loved the duel! I nearly lmao reading it! a tree? thank gods, Albus interferred. the good things is that Severus and Harry have reached the understanding that is needed for them to work together. I'm really concerned about this person with the dark eyes, watching everyone.

Trust Bella to LIKE a rape. geezzze! She is really a piece of work and you write her beautifully.

Another good chapter... I wish the gang could see more of what's going on - I really feel they are missing too much of what is happening. Clue them in - Please!!!

beaweasley22008.03.18 - 07:08PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
Oh, I loved the scene with the Sphynx and that Hermione found the very one that Severus's mum owned. What luck. That alone would have been an awesome gift.

I'm now curious about the spell Harry put on Hermione. Why did Severus go off so badly - I know it's the secnt that reminded him about the Dark lOrd and that it 'marked' her but I'm so gad that Hooch was in the corridor and that Severus and Hermione worked things out. That was a tough read - and to have Severuscrying - actually crying! my heart went out to him. and just after he'd been a jerk!

Good for Ginny showing Harry and Ron her letter from Precy(prat) but poor Harry - he's walking into a snare with Severus's emotions all up and taught. I hope Severus HAS calmed down. I hope that they can talk rationally with each other...

Great story. Thank you SO VERY much for suggesting this to me! Whoooooo wowzers!

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