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DistinctVagueness2006.02.15 - 07:14PM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
'“What do you mean you’re not sure? Didn’t I ever arouse you?” Ron asked indignantly. “You should know if you’re aroused or not!”' A sporadic review as I read my way through this...just to mention that this line really tickled my sense of humour. Fantastic dialogue....*grin* *continues*

Author's Response: LOL. I really enjoyed writing Ron in this story. He is such a great character, especially with dialogue. :) Thank you

breastlady2006.02.15 - 12:48AM35: Chapter Thirty FiveSigned
Great chapter! I don't know why but the Bella Harry part was fascinating. I wondered how far he would go. And what's up with Ginny and Hermione?

Author's Response: I like the sneaky Harry/Bella, too. LOL

breastlady2006.02.14 - 08:41PM34: Chapter Thirty FourSigned
I really liked all the different elements of the ceremony. Did you get all of it from one place and are they all part of a real ceremony? I've never seen a hand fasting. The only thing is I wouldn’t have been willing to use Lily's ring had I been Hermione. I'm not sure how would handle it to preserve Harry's feelings but he should have known since he was aware that Snape had fancied his mom. I also would have wanted the ring to be really from me. She's a better woman than I am.

Author's Response: These are parts of a real ceremony and some of it was embellished a bit. Well, I guess since it wasn't truly Lily's ring, Hermione didn't mind. She did intend to refuse at first. I am certain that once she has her salary that she'll get him a ring on her own.

BloodyBrilliantRuthie2006.02.13 - 07:03PM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
The changing of the mark was brilliant. Great story thus far!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

Missy52006.02.11 - 08:13PM49: Chapter Forty NineSigned
You know my dear writer, that you are a true health hazard? ;) I keep finding myself at my computer, reading your story well into the night... It is currently 2:15 am and I am writing this review to let you know I do enjoy your work. I just cannot believe I still haven't finished it ! :-) I do feel like sleeping, but I will be back... I am definately going to follow you around ;)

Author's Response: Haha! Sorry about that! I'm happy you are enjoying the story though!

Piristinity2006.02.10 - 06:33AM5: Chapter FiveSigned
OK, this has got nothing to do with the story, but I knew my that I had read the expression "until now" very often when my college professor criticized that we should never ever write that in English, but use "so far" instead. (I am German.) That'll tell her... I love that "holy shit" part in the middle of this sensual scene ;) Oh, and I forgot: Nice role for Draco.

Author's Response: Yes, I normally agree. It goes along with the tense you are using and whether or not it's in dialogue. But if I am using a past tense narrative, general pov, then, yes, I should stay away from it. I'm much more polished and aware as a writer now than when I wrote this over a year ago. I am so happy that you are liking this story. This was my first ever posted. :)

Piristinity2006.02.10 - 06:08AM4: Chapter FourSigned
Poor Ron, trying to help but always saying clumsy things. I like the role you've given Harry; he usually comes off badly in other stories.

Author's Response: I am a Harry fan and had to give him something "special" here. LOL... He gets a much larger role later on.

Piristinity2006.02.10 - 05:52AM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
Ron is simply brilliant; just the way he really would react. And "his greasiness" - priceless! "definitely have to take points from Gryffindor over this somehow" I don't want to cite the whole chapter, but I just love your style.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are liking it.

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