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126353972005.02.14 - 10:14AM34: Chapter Thirty FourSigned
I love that Harry and Ron were able to be there for Hermione! I am a bit worried about Ginny... is something going to snap in her?? You have some of the best punctuation I have ever seen.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Ginny needs some counseling...big time. She has some issues, and you know, this may sound bad, but the things she is thinking, I thought some of those already when my grandma passed away. I looked around as I was I was giving her eulogy, and I saw all of these people that never spent time with her there.
I know they were probably busy and what have you, but for a bit, I did think naughty things like WTF are ya'll doing here now? She needed you when she was alive. So, I tried to pour some of that into Ginny. Like my thoughts, I think it will pass, but she may need someone to talk to. And, I thought about not putting Ron there, but I don't think he would miss Hermione's wedding no matter what (Harry either).
I really appreciate the review, and more will be on the way as soon as possible. Thanks!! Cheers! ~Sunshine~

queenp2005.02.14 - 10:08AM34: Chapter Thirty FourSigned
Excellent ceremony...The ring Harry gave Hermione to give to Severus was an awesome thing--1st for doing it and 2nd for the description of it. This is a wonderful story that I look forward to reading..You keep it very emotionally involved..(I tear up often as I am reading it..) Keep up the excellent work...and I hope the next update is SOON! (I know beta out of town, but a girl can dream can't she?) WONDERFUL story!

Author's Response: lol! thanks so much for understanding. I felt so bad about the delay in updating. I suppose I should have written ahead and had them beta'd before hand, but I must admit, the other story has me a bit backlogged. Sigh. Pssst... she'll be home tomorrow night... muahahahahahha...

The reviews mean a lot to me. I'm glad that people find it touching. It let's me know that it's coming out as I meant for it to. I thought that was kewl about Harry's ring. hehe... Thanks!

procrastinatordh2005.02.13 - 02:27PM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
wow great story! i hope you update asap!

Author's Response: i've just sent chapter 34 to my beta. she will go over it this evening and i'll update. cheers!

medicdaddy2005.02.12 - 02:46PM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
I forgot . Sorry I cant send chocolate but Pickles is hording it and wont tell where she hides it.

Author's Response: man!! and i sent her some on my review for libertine i think (sneaks some chocolate your way..shhh our secret).

medicdaddy2005.02.12 - 02:43PM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
What a chapter. I see things are comming together. Well all but that darn incubus. Well now we know that by now Hermine knows Snapes touch and how it makes her feel, so getting rid of it wont be a problem. Or she is reseptive and could become pregnant by Snape. After they get married of corse. Maybe on there wedding day? Again there i go telling someone how to write when i am to chicken to start my own. Well hope you up date soon. Thanks Bill

Author's Response: The Incubus just thinks he's slick lol... he's got this big plan, but severus will mess it all up. hehe next chapter that i wrote has more on the wedding

Author's Response: i forgot to say...i would love to read something that you've written! if you do post, let me know! cheers

southern_witch_692005.02.12 - 12:42PM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Just in case anyone is checking, my beta left town on Thursday and won't be back until Tuesday. She'll try to check things over for me anyway, but being on holiday, it will be hard to get these chapters out. Cheers to you all! I'd say there are about seven chapters left (unless I decide to combine a few). xoxoxox

Author's Response: Well, thank you (me) lol. too funny. I wasn't sure that would work. hahaha

Armor2005.02.11 - 01:09AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
This chapter was very good. And it was very interesting to see the point of view of the incubus. Poor thing, he's not very smart. Just a question... What if Hermione conceived a child wiht Severus ? He told her he loved her ! and she had no potion... They can't hold each other for ever. ;) I was stunned by your Lucius... he's becoming selfless! wow. Though I hope he will be fine. Keep the good work

Author's Response: i decided to throw a bit of incubus in there lol and yes, he's dense. Hermione doesn't realize that her pregnancy potion has been "voided" out thanks to Poppy's healing potion. I think maybe they might do a bit more than hold each other. I thought that was nice of Lucius as well, though I think he was trying to just move Severus out of the way! lol He will live. More up as soon as I can. cheers!

Selene2005.02.10 - 07:55PM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
*cries* that was beautiful! whats the deal with old man higgs' death? is it more than it seems?

Author's Response: i'll explain it in the next chapter. i'm leaning towards he had a bad heart and a previous scare with nagini thanks to voldemort just frightened him. Sounds lame, but figured would be ok. didn't want draco to be a killer and didnt want another snake attack lol... thanks for reviewing!!! cheers

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