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Fictionlover_322005.02.10 - 11:50AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Poor Lucius! I never imagined that the elder Malfoy would sacrifice himself to save Snape, that never crossed my mind. The hex must've been painful, not to mention lethal, I hope Lucius is okay. I don't want him to die, since I like Lucius in this fic(can't believe I said that!) I also never thought that Karkoriff would make an entrance. I have a feeling Hermione will have a hard time getting rid of the incubus, since it has a whole new plan up his sleeve. The plot is getting thicker! Which I like, because it's so dramatic and that can really spice up a story! Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: Uh huh! Must have been a reflex to try to move Sev outta the way. i'm thinking he'll survive though.
i thought it would be interesting to see another 'reformed' death eater added to the mix and show how the arses treated him. i never did like karkaroff much, so a little rough treatment to him is fine by me...teehee.
As far as the incubus, well, i dont think its plan will work all that well. Severus has plans of his own. We have to see what happens next! hehe... More up as soon as i can! cheers.

tjbaby2005.02.10 - 11:34AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Funny - it's how I pictured Severus to be when he said it. Always wanting to say it when he finally got around to voicing it. Ok I'm a sad sap really, beneath it all. I'm thinking that the Incubus won't stand a chance now tat Severus is back in the picture. Well that's what I'm hoping for... [translate that to mean that I don't want you to make it otherwise.... please????] So does Harry really have some of old Voldie's memories??? Or was he extremely good at guessing? btw, in case I haven't mentioned it, I really love this story. You're doing very well and having read your other work, I hope you continue writing this great stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think the Incubus won't stand a chance either. hehe. As far as Harry, yes, there is something there. I touched upon when he killed Voldemort in an earlier chapter, but I never embelished. Sev had thought that Harry had died because he fell too.
I think I explained it as Voldemort trying to take him with him or something. There was another transfer of magic and such that did give him more powers and memories than he'd known about. I'll bring that up in just a bit though. i'm really glad you like the story! I love to write just as much as I love to read! cheers! more up as soon as i can. my beta will be out of town for a weekend visit. we're not sure if she'll have time to check over things.

TNgirl2005.02.10 - 10:25AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Great Chapter!!! Harry was great! I loved the snakes doing all his dirty work! Poor Severus, I'm glad he finally realized just how much Hermione meant to him and told her!! Update soon, please!!

Author's Response: Thanks, doll! I love the snakes as well...hehe and yes! it's about time severus tells hermione of his feelings. more up asap

queenp2005.02.10 - 09:13AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
OK, so the incubus is back...but...it is planning on waiting for her next cycle to impregnate her...so...she needs to get pregnant now(ish)...That would solve that problem...As for the rest of the chapter...Yay, Harry! Love the way he handled the DEs. He did good by changing Stebbins mark...He was great in dealing with psycho-bitch Bella....Poor Lucius, he needs to pull through in this story. I like him here...Psycho-bitch Bella needs to reverse the curse on Luna, for the sake of Ron if nothing else--but she doesn't need to know that it will benefit a Weasley or she'll refuse to do it...Chapter was great, SW69. Loved it and am waiting for the next update. Make it soon, PLEASE!!

Author's Response: about bella, exactly! if she thinks harry wants it for some "bad" thing, she's cool with it, the wench! lucius will live. yay! about the incubus, right. that's bad news. he thinks he's slick but if sev gets there first, then...too bad, so sad. lol. I hope to post the next chapter up soon, but my beta is going out of town for the weekend to visit her mate, so if I feel that i have proofed it enough, then certainly. I'll post soon. Cheers!

lynn_k_fletcher2005.02.10 - 08:30AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Yea...the big L from Severus. But what about the incubus and all the wounded ppl? And what about the reversal hex for Luna? Oh, don't leave me hanging here, update soon!

Author's Response: all up in the next chapter. hehe

ancientgirl2005.02.10 - 08:01AM33: Chapter Thirty ThreeSigned
Good chapter. I hope Lucius is okay. Thank goodness Sev finally said it!

Author's Response: bout time sev speaks up!! lol thanks. he'll live (lucius). cheers, doll!

Tarah_Fae2005.02.09 - 08:50PM20: Chapter TwentySigned
*cheers!* I knew Hermione would wear him down eventually! Too bad about... other circumstances. T_T

Author's Response: teehee!! glad you liking!

Tarah_Fae2005.02.09 - 06:33PM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
Damn damn damn! Please dont let them have a row! I want smoochies and luvvings!

I love the music you used for that movie! Haunting! @__@

Author's Response: thank you so much! i just watched it a bit ago myself!

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