Reviews for The Succubus
lil_jouett | 2005.02.14 - 11:52PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
25th reviewer! Not sure what good that is, but atleast i'm divisible by 5! (sorry...) Anyways, wonderful chapter, i've got to go to work tonight to help the night stockers, so sorry i can't write more. I might pop in tomorrow to say some stuff, but here's a condensed version: Sev & Herm wonderful, yay lucius, hope luna gets better, poor percy, poor ron and ginny (hope they don't fight) and looking forward to another great chapter! Luv ya! ~Lil Jouett
Author's Response: condensed version was perfect! hehe i'm glad you liked it, doll. more up asap. cheers!! and thanks!! |
ancientgirl | 2005.02.14 - 09:28PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
Yay, they finally got hitched! Great chapter as usual. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: thanks, doll! more up asap! hehe |
Lana Manckir | 2005.02.14 - 08:45PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
Weee how romantic! Love Sev's middle name, it wasn't lost on me when I read it LOL I may be way off here, but does Draco feel more than a friendship toward Ron? I know they have become good friends but sometimes you make it seem as if he kinds of fancies him. Maybe I'm wrong ;-)
Author's Response: yes, i think draco does sort of like ron. not that he wants to, but it's just something he's feeling. i dont know if he'll have the nerve to play on it though (after all, he told mione he wasn't batting for both teams lol) could have been an act though hehe |
HarryPotterSNL | 2005.02.14 - 07:20PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
wow! you are evil! you cant simply stop there. It was just getting good! I will admit that it was one of the best chapters but still! I mean, come on! It's Valentine's Day...you gotta put the lemons in there. I guess, I will have to wait. You did a wonderful job with this chapter. The wedding was very well done. And I love how Lucius and Narcissa finally have realized that they love each other, that was a good touch. And the funeral was very good, I like how Harry and Ginny admitted they loved each other. It was a very good chapter. Please update as soon as humanly possible!
Author's Response: thanks so much. i appreciate that. i was pretty satisfied with it as well. i spent a lot of time looking up flower and candle and color meanings lol too funny. plus i think e1 had the right amount of interaction. my beta will be home tomorrow night at some point so on wednesday we'll be returning to normal. she'll look over what she can when she can. thanks so much! cheers |
droxy | 2005.02.14 - 06:37PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
I love all the rituals and a black lily for the funeral.
Author's Response: thanks so much! cheers |
snarkyroxy | 2005.02.14 - 05:45PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
Great chapter! The binding was interesting - I've seen the cords used a lot of times, but never the wax. The ring from Harry was a nice touch too. Will Severus find out where it came from in the future? I'd love to see his reaction if she just says it came from Harry - he'll think it was James'. lol.
Author's Response: exactly! lol too funny i'm sure a few peeps will laugh over that! but once he realizes it's not james', he'll be fine hahaha! ty so much! more up soon |
Armor | 2005.02.14 - 05:27PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
This was a lovely biding. And your idea of the crystal was very good... It was so simple but very romantic. Well done.
Though no news of the beast... perhaps in the next chapter ?
Author's Response: definitely. he'll make an appearance in the next chapter! hehehe i think he'll be more surprised than anything very soon. cheers, doll |
tjbaby | 2005.02.14 - 05:19PM | 34: Chapter Thirty Four | Signed |
Awwwww!!! Lovely ceremony! Just all warm and fuzzy now. Funny how weddings do that to you???? I like Narcissa getting in to see Lucius and for him finally seeing how much she feels for him. That was so lovely and poignant. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: thanks! glad you liked it! more up about everyone soon. it's all winding down now.. sigh.. hehe |
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