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| droxy | 2005.01.23 - 11:13AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| wow what a long chapter! Is the succubus going to come back?
thanks for your frequent updates you must really be beating your beta! Author's Response: my beta says to tell you, she is the one beating me (lol). A right slave driver i say, and I love it! No, the succubus is gone (sorry), but mione can 'attempt' to be one. lol | |||
| LariLee | 2005.01.23 - 10:55AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| Still wonderful with lots of twisty turns. ~Lisa Author's Response: thanks! more up in a bit... whew | |||
| grill | 2005.01.23 - 10:29AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| And a good piece of lemon it was, too! Must have been some experience for Severus, I bet... Gods, I love that he's so possessive! Strangely enough, there's something charming and affectionate about that. And obviously, it's just so HIM. Anyway, I loved this chapter and I'm curious to see what these evil blokes want to use Bellatrix for! Keep it all coming, I can't wait to see what happens next... (Especiallly I'll admit I'm curious about the return of "jealous Snape"... He's fascinating!) Author's Response: uh huh! i love possessive sev too.. yummers! gonna start uploading 25 in just a couple of mins. I hope their backlog is gone! lol bella will wake up in 26 (evil grin). thanks! | |||
| HarryPotterSNL | 2005.01.23 - 09:39AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| Great chapter! I liked the lemon. And I can't wait to see how things turn out with Bella, that will be interesting for sure. And I hope Severus isn't too jealous in the next chapter... plus I wonder what Hermione is going to do for his birthday. So now you have to upload chapter 25 because this one was posted...and you better upload it soon because I need something to help me procrastinate homework. Author's Response: lol! i will be uploading asap. Poor lot has been backlogged terribly. he will be jealous again and for what he believes is good reason. you'll see. hehe. The birthday works out! :) thanks!! | |||
| Armor | 2005.01.23 - 09:03AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| This was a wonderful chapter but I'm a bit confused with the plot of the bad guys...well, I can't even remember who is Bradly or why the father is so useful... When I will have some time (damned exams) I will re-read this previous chapters.
good luck for the writing and as always, big thanks to your beta. The betas are too often forgotten Author's Response: quick run down. bradley = old ravenclaw student (his girl killed by death eaters; he hates them; they need him b/c he is really good with a potion that will bring bella back) The Higgs family used to serve Voldemort but never took a dark mark. They were more or less silent supporters giving money and such. They want to make the traitors (sev / mione) pay and are using bradley to bring Bella back. lol... whew. my brilliant beta, nay, says thank you very much! she is great. i send it to her and get it back within a couple of hours. Thanks for reviewing! Author's Response: sorry.. traitors = sev/ lucius lol not sev/ mione.. she's just in the wrong place at the wrong time | |||
| Arwen999 | 2005.01.23 - 08:27AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
| Hi! Very good chapter!!! I love jealous Sev! He's so cute! For a moment, I really thought Draco was in love with Hermione! That boy knows how to lie! And I found that Severus' thoughts about Harry were touching! Author's Response: draco is sneaky huh? lol thanks doll. just so happens more jealous sev up again in a bit. :) | |||
| tjbaby | 2005.01.23 - 07:03AM | 24: Chapter Twenty Four | Signed |
Finally! I had withdrawal symptoms! I know, I know... they have a backlog, but it was so hard waiting for the next ep! ;-) hehehe I must admit my heart was in my throat when I first started reading. I thought the succubus had returned for real! And Severus coaching Harry was nicely done. Not too pushy and not too "oh my god, she rushed them into it" kind of thing. I am pleased to see Marietta and Stuart coming to the fore a bit more. Oh goody, my thoughts may actually pan out with your storyline! Thanks. Author's Response: hell i had withdrawal's too. i was like man what's the deal? over two days!! but yeah they were big time backlogged. lol hehe about the succubus. mione was trying to be a temptress lol! yep sev / harry moving right along. chap 26 u will see a little bicker with them but only for a bit. marietta/stuart will be up again soon as well | |||
| medicdaddy | 2005.01.22 - 04:58AM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
| what a delightfull story had to stop here to get some sleep.I couldnt think of anything i would change. well tomarrow is another day of reading and hopefully more reviews. Well keep up the great job. Bil Author's Response: thanks so much! It's been nearly two days (sigh) since i've uploaded my other chapter...and nothing.. i'm sure it'll be approved at some point today. they are probably backed up a little. thanks so much. enjoy | |||
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