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illnevertell2005.03.22 - 01:26PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
Ok It's official I am now totally hooked on this story! I have finally managed to read all of the chapters posted and I am on the edge of my seat to see what happens next. I have developed a few theories of my own about Bella and if it goes the way I am thinking it will I have to say it is one of the most BRILLIANT ideas I have ever read! You are an amazingly talented writter and I hope you go on to write more H.P. fics. I will be there to read them all. * Kudos * Jaimie

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i'm glad you like it. i'm working on the rest now! more up soon (bella's fate will be known). Cheers!

Fictionlover_322005.03.21 - 11:34PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
Aww! This chapter has been sweet! I loved the Sensitivity charm Hermione used on Severus to feel her baby! That was cool! I wish people could do that in reali life! I know Ron and Draco have settled on their differences, but I would like them to attempt a relationship and get out of it realizing that they're not right for each other, without anyone knowing it! It'll be absolutely hilarious! As for Harry, I think he's finally cracked. From the hint I got in the end of the chapter, Harry is planning to sleep with Bella. At least, that's what I'm thinking. It's bad enough Harry is letting Bella escape, but to sleep with her, he would be making the biggest mistake of his life! Not only Ginny won't forgive him, he would lose Severus's respect of him too. I don't think Harry wants to lose that. On the other hand, Harry doesn't have that much choice, does he? Poor Harry! But I'm sure he'll figure things out, like always! Wonderful chapter as always! Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: i wish we could use that charm as well! it would be brilliant! that would be hilarious (r/d trying but deciding, no thanks! lol). Harry is being naughty, isn't he? tsk tsk i say. Ginny will never know if he does though. i wonder if we'll even know? i have something wicked up next. hehe more up soon, and thanks! cheers!!

HarryPotterSNL2005.03.21 - 11:24PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
no! Harry cant be with bella! That is wrong...I wish she would just die, and I know that sounds mean but I know she will cause future problems. Anyway on a better note, I loved all the Seveus/Hermione action. The note was incredubly sweet. It was a perfect valentine's day. And I did love the whole lockhart bashing at the party. Definately funny!

Author's Response: lol dont worry, doll. most people are hating on bella right about now. i guess we'll have to see what happened eh? hehe glad you liked the severus/hermione stuff! more up soon

Terra of Slytherin2005.03.21 - 09:48PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
I am finally caught up! YAY!!! Ramos story was Hinge of Fate and your right it was brilliant. But on to more important factors... I thnk Harry is going to turn Bella into a Viper Snake or the snake that is going to be delivered. Glad the Bella's magic will be gone. Also enjoy, Ron's obvious jealously toward Draco's date with Daphne. Always thought Lucius batted both sides...lol. I think Harry and Ginny belong together... yet I must admit I would really like Harry and Bella together. If they do have sex, I just hope Ginny doesn't find out. Hmmm, I wonder, does Ginerva know about him and Nymphadora and about her being his first? Loved V-day, not much fluff... Hmmm, there are more thoughts just can't think of them now...lol ~Terra

Author's Response: lol i had faith on there. good grief. lmao. fixed that! i loved that story. That was Harry's plan, yes, but i wonder what will happen? :) too funny about ron huh? hahaha that silly boy. I'm the same about harry/bella (i must be naughty b/c i wanted them to shag). Ginny does not know about tonks hehe Thanks so much, doll

pickles2005.03.21 - 05:18PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
Thank you for good chapter to read. Boy Harry is so mental... they should take him to the St Mungos mental ward. Liked the written words for Hermione. excellent. that could be a challenge in itself. writing a poem using the letters of their names.. hope your tests go well. keep us informed

Author's Response: thanks, doll. yep, i fear harry has a big mental block ... lol. glad you liked it! more up soon! cheers... i'm feeling great today.

Winna2005.03.21 - 12:15PM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
Harry, Harry, Harry (Winna shakes her head sadly). Much as I love me some Dark!Harry, I think he's heading for trouble here. As for Ron & Draco, I really don't see them getting together; however, a scene where they TRY to get together, and get put off by the, um, mechanics of man on man sex could be hilarious. I mean, I really can't see either one volunteering to be the bottom. That's just my opinion, and I'll be happy to read whatever you come up with.

Author's Response: yep! bad harry, the berk. i love your ideas on ron and draco. i hadn't planned on taking things that far b ut ahahahah that would be hilarious (will keep this in mind). more up soon! thanks

gryffindor162005.03.21 - 05:40AM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
Hi.. I've been reading your stories the last few days and you write really well.. your plot twists are compelling, your characters real and i'm enjoying every bit of it. Can't wait to find out what harry's up to.. also, i dont know what your eventual plans are for draco/ ron, but i really hope they get together.. please please! they'd make such a sweet couple! waiting for the next chappie with bated breath.. Sara; sararashid@yahoo.com

Author's Response: i'm so glad that you are liking this! i try to twist things up to keep it interesting. Ron and Draco may end up being 'friendly' hehehe. more up soon

medicdaddy2005.03.21 - 01:28AM44: Chapter Forty FourSigned
I realy hope that since you do update with in a few days of the last update that you wouldnt fell pressured to make a fast update as to not be up to your usual standard. that would not be like you and verry sad indeed.so I will sit on my cliff and wait until you do. Can you imagine that pickles not reviewing. I know probably do to me hogging the screen all week end. If you are not updated buy monday at least know that your most loyal readers will wait until you post again. health comes first you know . Dont want to have to come for you with the ambu-bus. well until then Bill

Author's Response: lol how's tha cliff? just kidding. i've got the next bit outlined with detail, but i'm not going to be home today. :( i am going to be having tests run. no 'ambu-bus' just yet, but nearly. lol.. more up soon

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