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Mouse2005.01.13 - 02:45AM13: Chapter ThirteenSigned
Hey come to my house you can have some of mine. ;D

Author's Response: lol...directions? prob very far away! my broom is in the shop right now

Mouse2005.01.13 - 02:43AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
Gape! I can't believe you just left us hanging there. meanie, Gee! (J/K) See Mouse? See Mouse pout. Pout Mouse, pout. :( lol. Cool about Harry and the snakes out of smoke. I loved that. I'm wondering if the relationship is going to suffer from Hermione beeing so sneeky. Great Job none the less though.

Author's Response: Harry's gonna learn some good shit (heard jkr say that), so i improvised. lol! i think their relationship depends on the outcome of the dream. don't pout! i accidentially read ahead a chap and things are fine!

KarlaMarie2005.01.13 - 02:16AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
bugger i want to know what happens now!!!

Author's Response: lol.. psst (big bad dream snape is gonna be quite wicked)

Trey2005.01.13 - 02:15AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
I really like this, and i really like the fact you upate quickly. keep up the good work. 10/10

Author's Response: thank you much! more soon

Mouse2005.01.13 - 02:13AM14: Chapter FourteenSigned
Na, you did fine. Gads I do feel bad for her, being pushed a way like that. My heart was just breaking for her. Sniff :( Men can be so stubborn when they get an idea into their heads. I agree with you about the whole parent thing. Hermione isn't your average teen. She wouldn't date just anyone and certainly wouldn't bring home just some guy. Her life is complicated enough, and I think her parents would trust her judgmment. . . that and possibly ask MANY questions about him to Molly. Great as always. I'm dying to see what she and Harry will cook up. :D

Author's Response: right. i think they would respect her decisions as well. i can see their concerns, but they are muggles, after all. they know they are limited (is that the right word?) when it comes to her world. she's been off most of the time since nearly twelve and now she's all grown up. and lucky for snape, she wants him. hehehe. she'll be all right. mione always has a plan

compulsivelyObsessive2005.01.13 - 12:59AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
Fabulous chapter my dearest! The best supply of "good shit" that you've let us have. The discussion with Snape and Harry was oh-so-wonderful and I was pleased that Harry wasn't rigid as he sometimes is in other interpretations. I feel it's more appropriate that he become comfortable with the darkness within himself and within others because it's an indelible part of life. His discussion with Hermione was particularly beautiful. I don't have anything terribly amusing to say in this review, wish I did. Glad I make you smile and laugh on occasion. I do have an odd urge to refer to Severus as 'Snapers' kind of like 'capers' I guess but more Snape-ish. His birthday was recently! Shocked the pants off me, I can tell you. I shall forever hold it as a day to dream about snogging a man twice my age that happens to be singularly unpersonable. But then, don't we all dream of that? Obviously. If we didn't, we'd be off writing HG/RW which I for one find disturbing. Severus has scary dreams now? He'd be permanently on edge if he ever read some of the sappier HG/RW out there, after he was done vomitting, that is. Firewhiskey....well, in fandom Severus is always drinking that but I do have to say that the way he's written suggests that he's a Martini man. Perhaps a Vodka type person as well. Tequila doesn't seem right with him, plus he would never be able to pronounce it correctly. If you've ever heard Alan Rickman speak Spanish, you know exactly what I mean. Okay, it's off to bed for me. First day back at uni. tomorrow. Maybe I'll meet some nice professors *purrrrrr*. -cO

Author's Response: you know...i've thought on snogging alan rickman often... lol. anyone have his address? i guess his partner wouldnt mind too much if i brought him back in time for breakfast. good luck at the uni... pay extra attention in your potions class! as far as harry, i like a darker harry. i think he'll grow into that at some point *or i hope*

DayLightDancer2005.01.13 - 12:08AM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
oooooohhh shit!! cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Author's Response: lol! coming soon

ancientgirl2005.01.12 - 11:50PM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
Happy reading, nothing happy about this last chapter. Major angst, God I felt so bad for both of them. I know things will turn out well, I just hope they can work through it. I can understand Severus' feeling somewhat betrayed, but Hermione did it for his own good. He just needs to realize that.

Author's Response: he will! he's trying to do it for her own good. two headstrong peeps lol. dream land will be up next (hehe..get to write dark snape again..lol)

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