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SwissMiss2006.04.21 - 11:11AM4: Chapter FourSigned
The phrase "self-fulfilling prophecy" comes to mind. Being told that, in the future, you will fall in love with a certain person may not make you actually fall in love, but will certainly make you look at that person differently, looking for appealing qualities. I had an erotic dream about one of my college professors once, (not that I was consiously interested in him or anything) and could never look at him the same way after. Yeah, I was wondering the same thing as Ron: if the Incubus only comes to a virgin, why couldn't she get rid of him by losing her virginity. It's not like Hermione to just dismiss that out-of-hand. Give it a try, why don't ya? (OK, I know, I know, that would mess up your plot, because it has to be Severus who takes her virginity. Looking forward to that.) *tee-hee* Boys aroused by her outbursts. Ooh, Severus getting possessive. That's good. Hermione does have kind of a hopeless romantic side, doesn't she. Hope she doesn't turn into a wanton slut now. Fun chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, I agree. Things can certainly interpreted to mean what they want them to when so little info is given. Hehe.

SwissMiss2006.04.20 - 03:24PM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
Loved Ron's tirade. Think he pretty much stole the show in this chapter for me. Which is fine! LOL! The scene on the Astronomy Tower--fun! *snorfle* "What do you mean you're not sure? Didn't I ever arouse you?" -- Good old Ron.

Author's Response: Teehee. Ron is great fun to "use" at times.

SwissMiss2006.04.20 - 03:13PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Nice: Minerva and Albus. I always thought so, too. I like both Hermione's and Severus's reactions to the news, very in-character. And that moment when their eyes meet and they both see the possibility.

Author's Response: Even with the age difference, it seems like they might have some affection (mm/ad).

SwissMiss2006.04.20 - 03:02PM1: Chapter OneSigned
"Think, man. Whom do you know that could suit you?” --Hmmm... Who could it be, who could it be? Could it be... The devil?! (Sorry, old Church Lady joke, couldn't resist. :-D) Finding it interesting that Albus thrives on lemons... Fantastic plot device. Settling in for a long night....

Author's Response: Ah, my first ever posted hg/ss story. Yes, it's long an holds a lemon eating Albus.

ShadowHand2006.04.16 - 05:14PM20: Chapter TwentySigned
Oooh, naughty little Hermione. I noticed he didn't put up the fight for long...! Thanks, ShadowHand

Author's Response: Yeah, I probably should have made them wait it out some more, but.....

ShadowHand2006.04.16 - 04:53PM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
Oooh, I wonder what Higgs is up to! Sorry I haven't reviewed till now. I've just been so caught up with the story and I was waiting for a lull. I can't wait to read the rest! Thanks, ShadowHand P.S I figured that although the story is completed, and feedback isn't as crucial, you wouldn't mind me clogging up your inbox with compliments. Would you? lol...

Author's Response: No, I don't mind at all. Hehe. I hope you've continued on and liked it. :)

pitcha2006.04.13 - 10:15PM1: Chapter OneSigned
Howdy, This story is absolutely awesome! Well done! two thumbs up!! I also enjoy the other stories that you have written (Vengance is Sweet and Lureing the Enchantress), they are extremely good. You have quite a knack for this writting business. Keep it up. Looking forward to what you have install next. Good Luck.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm happy you like my sordid tales and look forward to hearing from you again.

Prance Saunders2006.04.12 - 04:27AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
I did very much enjoy this story. You make your characters so real. I laughed, I cried, it became a part of me. HEHE! Keep on with your very stylish writing and I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm happy you've enjoyed it.

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