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Fictionlover_322005.04.15 - 04:50PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
Wow! What a ride it has been! Thank goodness for Harry! He's a powerful wizard. I don't know quite sure what he did but he brought Mione back to life without even using his wand, now that's power! I truly thought the fic was going to end with Mione's death, but I didn't want to accept it, and when Harry came in, I knew everything was going to be all right. Whew! At least the baby's healthy, and I like her name, it suits her. I wonder what the Succubus meant by completing the prophecy? Did the Succubus interfere with the baby's birth? Can't wait for the next installment! Update soon. Cheers!

Author's Response: uh huh Dark!Harry appears.. full potential is coming out. i'm so glad that harry was there. :) The Succubus didnt interfere with the birth. The first bit was completed b/c severus joined with hermione and their heir will grow with harry's. more up soon! :) thanks so much for sticking with it. lonnnngggg story. hehe :) cheers

Lyndie5782005.04.15 - 04:40PM9: Chapter NineSigned
Oh, I'm so glad that they "finally" got together. So how much hassle with their demons be? I wonder...

Author's Response: a big hassle! i'm so glad to see you are still reading :)

Satoni2005.04.15 - 04:37PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
when Hermione died...I was just....MAD! I jsut couldn't believe you would do this to me, I was in shock, didn't breath until Harry came to the rescue, than I knew she would be fine....Still a bit shocked though. *blank look in my eyes, softly and slowly breathing unable to speak* Anyway....I'll be waiting for the epilogue...when will you update vengeance is sweet? cheers !

Author's Response: uh huh.. poor hermione. but harry to the rescue. i couldnt kill her off. i love my characters :) Vengeance will be up tomorrow evening. :) i've been working on it since I completed this.

pickles2005.04.15 - 02:55PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
Bill and I were discussing your story a little today. We've come to the conclusion that Dumbledore has been teaching Harry "old magic" like his mother used on him. An Dumbledore may be transferring some of his power to help Harry recover. Will Dumbledore be around for the next "task"? Since Harry has given Hermione some of his blood they are like "blood siblings". Now when he transferred some of his blood to her did he receive some of her blood? OOOhhh will Hermione be able to speak parseltongue (sp?)? or have some similar powers of Harry? An will Lily (Harry's Mom) visit Hermione? Or did she tell Hermione what is ahead of her and Mione can't remember at the moment? Will everyone take their explanation of how Harry brought her back - CPR? What is Bella's reaction to all of this? Will the Succubus use Bella against Harry? Will Ginny have complications? Hope not. Will Neville wind up with the girl that Narcissa wants for Draco? You could do your version of "Desperate Housewives" with all of these couples. I think the Snape family needs one more. Epecially since it will have Severus/Hermione/Harry blood... What a combo... Or do they have a second child and this one feels left out and becomes the darklord? Since the fertility fairy is around will there be some other storks making deliveries? Will Trelawney have another moment? Will the Succubus visit Mione without Mione knowing? So the Succubus can learn to act like Victor's "dream witch"? Well I'll check back for the epilogue... Patty

Author's Response: wow...where to start? Let's see... Yes, Dumbledore has been teaching Harry some potent stuff. He is using his magic to help Harry. He didn't get any of Hermione's blood, but his magic/blood will have an effect on her. Her near death experience will also be a factor on something.

Bella has a big part in the next section. The Succubus can touch nothing of Harry's.. the includes hermione and her kids. The only other stork for now will be visiting Lm/Nm. lol.. more up soon

Armor2005.04.15 - 01:21PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
That was great, Sunshine. Very well. I love the fact that Hermione died. So powerful. I've no word to describe how I felt during my reading, but be sure it's the best chapter that you have ever written. I will look forward to both your sequel and prequel. ~ Armor

Author's Response: thanks, doll. i'm glad you've enjoyed it. :) it was a very hard chapter for me to write. i felt so restricted. lol.. space limit and all that. i went through emotions while writing it and sniffed a bit :(

Lyndie5782005.04.15 - 12:44PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
How does he now she's a virgin? She probably is, but still a little presumptuous of Severus isn't it?

Author's Response: well, an incubus usually only visits a chaste woman whereas the succubus visits anyone (the tart). There is more than meets the eye here. That will come up later, but mostly, yes, he's being presumptuous.

Lyndie5782005.04.15 - 12:24PM1: Chapter OneSigned
Great start! I've just started reading, but you've just finished writing it--I think. It seems like such a "fun" SS/HG post. I am so looking forward to this read!

Author's Response: well thanks! You have a long read ahead of you, but it's really an interesting story. To me, anyway. I hope you like it

snapesoulmate2005.04.15 - 12:15PM50: Chapter FiftySigned
I have enjoyed every minute of reading this and all of your other stories. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for your stories

Author's Response: thanks very much! i appreciate that:) more up soon

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