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| Amethystique | 2006.03.01 - 04:56PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| WOW,WOW,WOW!!!! Oh my Goddess! I've just spent the past 6 hours completely entranced by this epic of a Novel! Yes, I've read the whole thing in one fell swoop, even eating my dinner in front of the computer! You have an incredible talent and this just goes to prove that you could give the incredible JKR lessons in the art of fiction writing. This tale has encompassed a whole plethera of emotions; I've laughed, cried, gasped and cringed and all I want to do now is read it again!!! BRILLIANT!! LOL ;-)X Author's Response: I'm happy that you enjoyed it. This is one of my favorites that I've written. I'll have a sequel up one of these days. | |||
| 1meg2megs | 2006.02.26 - 02:57AM | 18: Chapter Eighteen | Signed |
| This is a DAMN good story. I have never read a HG/SS story that was so in depth and original! You should be very proud of your work. It is a pleasure to read. Author's Response: Thanks. I'm happy that you liked this! I'll have more up soon. | |||
| Roth1900 | 2006.02.22 - 07:42PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Wow... that was a hell of a ride. Thanks. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :) | |||
| Missy5 | 2006.02.19 - 08:38PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Ow my lord! A second part? *sighs* ;-)
What a delightful, though somewhat darkened, story you have written, dear writer. Although it truly is a nightmare for my sleep... ehmm..... I meant to say that is keeps me up at nights, reading.
Ehm.... that doesn't sound that well either... But what would you expect at 2u40 am... again!
Please do hurry up with the part deux of this particular storyline. Just for my good night's rest, please do not let it turn much darker :S
Even though my chances for a good sleep diminishes if you do write a sequel I would not want to miss it ! :-D
(in the meantime, I will look at your other work. Some of which I truly loved reading)
Author's Response: I am happy that you enjoyed my story. I will be posting the sequel soon I hope, though I've been saying that for a while. LOL Cheers and I appreciate your kind words! | |||
| breastlady | 2006.02.18 - 02:54AM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| Remarkable! I'm sorry for Ron. I hope he gets a better girlfriend in the next story. I'm sorry for Ginny. I still don't trust Bellatrix. I think Harry is wrong to keep her and let her stay closer to him than Ginny. What Ginny did was immature but she is paying dearly for it. I'm not sure I understand the prophesy. Is Harry the next Dark Lord? I still think Bella influences him. Harry is a fool for not seeing it. What would Sirius think. She needs to die. I can't believe Hermione is so accepting of her. She needs a peek in that pensive before she lets the snake around her child. What kind of ideas could she put in Lillian's head as she grows up. I'm guessing Lillian may be a Parseltongue. Will Lily be the next Dark Lord? It seems to me that Albus doesn't hold Harry very accountable for his behavior . He is also too accepting of Harry's solution with Bellatrix. He is wiser than that, I think. Snape should not let Viktor Krum anywhere near Hermione or his child. I imagine he knows that on some level but Hermione will have her way I'm sure. As she gets older and wiser it may be too late for her to realize that men are pigs and Viktor is not simply her friend and never was. I wouldn't listen at that age either. But is pisses me off for Severus' sake. He knows. I would like in the next book for Lucis and Severus to get rid of Viktor and Bella. Hermione is too naive. It's time for a little revenge. I'd feel better. Maybe that makes me one of the bad guys. Thank you for a wonderful time reading your story. I loved it! Please don’t wait too long for the sequel. Warmly, Breastlady.
Author's Response: The prophecy was meant to be a little mysterious. There is more to it, but that's in the next one. Bella does have a role in the next story--a big one. Harry is much darker, yes. I'm of the mind that with time, the loss of Sirius grows less for him. Hermione is always pitying the less fortunate, so I guess she's feeling sorry for Bella and trusting Harry's judgment on that. Snape nearly lost Hermione, so some part of him feels compassion for Viktor's "loss"--though we know it's fake. Quite a few years pass before the sequel starts, so we'll see that Viktor is still a family friend, but Snape never allows Hermione to go off with him alone. Ever. There's much I could say, but I don't want to spoil it for you. :) | |||
| breastlady | 2006.02.17 - 09:57PM | 45: Chapter Forty Five | Signed |
| I think Harry needs some psycho therapy for wizarding megalomaniacs. I'm worried about him and if I was Albus and Severus I would be afraid of him. You’ve done a better job than anyone else I’ve ever read at depicting the Powerful Harry Potter Killer of Dark Lords. It makes sense he would be this scary. I never really thought about how writers rely so much on the certainty of his strong character and strong sense of right and wrong. He is only human and has been abused badly. I really couldn't believe he left Ginny alone with Bellatrix. I would expect him to be more protective towards Ginny. Also, knowing that Lastrange has the ability to cast dangerous dark spells, he didn't seem worried enough about Ginny perhaps being hit with something worse than a simple stunning spell. He didn't even seem as sorry as he should have for his gross lack of good sense in leaving Ginny alone with her. I feel like he used Ginny and brought her there to further his plans. I don't trust Harry right now. If I was Ginny I would really be hurt that he left me alone with Bellatrix. I wouldn't feel very valued. I think maybe she could get someone who cares more about her than Harry. Just having Tom Riddle in common isn't enough. She should be cherished. And what was that cackling sound he made as he chided Bellatrix for the last time. Why did he feel the need to sound like Voldemort if he was going to kill her anyway. We know he must have banished her to the new snake's body. I hope I'm wrong but it didn't sound like that purple light was to kill her. She was supposed to be dead already from the snakes strangling her. Second, I think Hermione is too cavalier about Severus' feelings regarding Viktor. I would be jealous too. Snape doesn't exchange letters with Rolanda nor dream about her. He doesn’t seek out her company for the sake of friendship. I know the dreams are because of the Succubus but I would still feel funny about them when you add the letters and the dinner invitation. And with Snape’s reputation shouldn’t Viktor be a bit cautious about pissing him off. I’m sure Viktor knows Snape is a powerful wizard with a knowledge of dark magic and a propensity for cruelty. This is a great story! Author's Response: You are right to not trust Harry at this point. He's walking a fine line. He knows what he should do, but it's sometimes hard to always do what's expected. You know? I think having all that power at one's disposal is very intoxicating, even for the good-natured people. You are dead on about Hermione's attitude with her letters to Viktor. I am with Snape on that one. Viktor is a bit leery of Snape, but I think he's just way to confident of having the Succubus on his side and of the future. He'll get his. LOL | |||
| BloodyBrilliantRuthie | 2006.02.17 - 07:36PM | 51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue) | Signed |
| I enjoyed this very much! Many parts of this story were absolutely brilliant. I loved your Dark Lord Harry, I loved Bella's punishment to live out her days as a snake, I loved Harry giving in to Bella and enjoying himself, I loved Loony the snake, Draco and Ron, etc. It was a fascinating story and I look forward to it's sequel. ~Ruthie Author's Response: I am so happy you liked this! Some people don't really like that Bella is still alive, but she's in my sequel. I needed her. ahahha... Thank you! | |||
| breastlady | 2006.02.17 - 03:26PM | 39: Chapter Thirty Nine | Signed |
| I thought Hermione's parents were way too harsh. There are some moments in time one can never take back even if one says they are sorry. I would remember forever how hurtful they had been to me if I were Hermione. I have two daughters 19 and 24. My Mom has taught me from example that sometimes after something has already happened that may have not been your first choice for your child, your best bet is not to burn your bridges or put a wall between you two. It’s all water under the bridge by then anyway. Adult children still need their parent's approval. Life is hard enough. Why make theirs harder. Otherwise, if the time for "I told you so" comes around they aren't going to want to tell you about it when you may have been able to help them. Close your lips, give them a hug and let the consequences be their teacher. If the consequences are grave, that is punishment enough for them. They are much more likely to be able to overcome with their parents help. I also think young adults make better choices when they believe their parents trust them to do the right thing. I think if Hermione's parents are as smart as they seem to think they are they will waist no time in begging Hermione and Severus for forgiveness. They can bemoan Hermione's fate in private with hurting her and their new Son. I love long stories by the way, and yours if wonderful.! I'm really enjoying it. Author's Response: Yes, her parents were terrible. When I was seventeen, I had a friend of the same age who became pregnant; her parents tossed her out. I thought that was so heartless. | |||
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