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Betz2005.03.27 - 10:51PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
I have one word to describe Viktor...SUCKER! My God, what a guilible fool he is, thinking the succubus will keep its promise to only take what it needs. Well, it's his funeral...or squib existance. I can see it now, he's in the middle of a big game, Viktor's broom is zipping along. Suddenly his magic fails and the broom and him plummet 75 feet. If he has no magic, what's to stop him from killing himself in the fall? Idiot. Hey! Where are Ron and Draco? What going on with those two? And Luna? If they do get around to getting together, will you write a chapter with the lemony goodness of all three? Wonder if Luna could be into Draco too? Oh, please, pretty please - with Draco on top - write it if it's in the story. Well, you're going to have to cute out missionary position for Hermione and Severus (found that at about four months, felt like a football in my stomach in the position and couldn't take the pressure). Soon, all it will be is hands and knees or on her side...the ONLY ones that are comfortable. Will Severus get bored with only those two in his sexual repetoir? Hermione will get fed up with the restriction of just two positions, I'm sure of it.

Author's Response: lol... yep, soon the tummy will be in the way. good thinking. i shall have to incorporate that into this. You know, I was wondering how people would feel about d/r/l lemons. I wouldn't mind writing some. Krum is a complete berk. lol

CarnalRhapsody182005.03.27 - 10:46PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Nice! I liked the little bit of smut at the end. It ended the chapter quite wonderfully. I liked the explanation that Harry gave Dumbledore. His explanation makes me feel better about what he did too. Its not what I expected. As for Krum, I agree with Severus. Krum is a right bastard. Especially the way he thinks of Severus and his guile to think that Hermione would have him after his scheming. I hope the Succubus takes all his magic and Severus gets to punch him in the face before the end of this story. ^_^ But then...I'm starting to become violent...so I'll leave this review at that. Great chapter! ~CR

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad people are feeling better about Harry. :) Krum is definitely not thinking straight. Who would want their magic taken no matter how good it felt? ahhahaaha The berk! more up soon! cheers

Selene2005.03.27 - 10:26PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
excuse me, that was not nearly enough! *cries* ah well, simply beautiful. sev isn't going to go all nuts and kill bella anyway is he? i hope not, i completely understand harry's thoughts. and hey, dumbledore approves. can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol... thanks! sev will be angry, but he'll have no choice but to accept things. Things are always good when Dumbledore approves!

angeLicaLLy_me2005.03.27 - 10:18PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
damn krum, the bastard should die....does he? *hopeful look* and very nice planning on harry's part...but is it going to stay that way? how will severus react to that? he's going to want bella killed. very nice chappy, update really really soon pls and tnx!

Author's Response: Harry's plan will work out. :) Severus will not be too happy. More up soon. Thanks

droxy2005.03.27 - 10:08PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Another plot twist with Krum, is he going to try to kill SS? Nice turn with Bella. Good characterization of Albus. Nice lemon!

Author's Response: thanks, drox. not in this story, Krum won't. I'm glad you liked the Bella turn. I hoped that would make peeps happy. More up soon!

pickles2005.03.27 - 09:52PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
HAPPY EASTER SUNSHINE!!! Thank you for the wonderful egg. The chapter was great. What will Snape's reaction be to Harry's new pet? Will Nagini know when Harry would pass away? At that time would she eat the other "Snake". I hope your Easter is wonderful.

Author's Response: lol ty doll.. glad you liked it! i dont think snape will be happy. yes, i'm sure nagini would know. more up soon. hope you had a good day!

SylvaniaSnape2005.03.27 - 09:52PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
I went from liking Krum to wanting him to be hexed into next week. Love harry's plan ...

Author's Response: yep, krum is a berk. Harry's plan did make sense to me too. glad you like it. :)

GinnyW2005.03.27 - 09:39PM46: Chapter Forty SixSigned
Oh Sunshine.....WONDERFUL! Wow...46 Chapters??? How many did you think this story would run? HA HA! Oh well...sometimes they just run away from you, don't they.... Very good, Krum is a complete moron...and well, now Harry's deal makes more sense. At least it doesn't appear that he kept Bella alive because he likes her! Thanks! ~Gin

Author's Response: lol i know my baby grew... i'm glad though that Harry has 'redeemed' himself somewhat. now krum is the berk. hahahaa more up soooon!

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