Ashwinder :: To bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses

Reviews for The Succubus

Dkstar	2005.02.17 - 09:19PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
wow - Harry and Bella - that was just - Hot ! Never ever seen that plot device........ And yay - Severus and Hermione are now happily married --- or are they ? Once again this story is great and very addictive ! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'd say you're the only one that thinks like me (muahahahha harry/bella = some odd yet hot stuff). hehe... They are for now, yes. The incubus won't be able to mess with them. If anything happens, well, that will be in the sequel.. lol Cheers! more up tomorrow at some point hopefully.

joots	2005.02.17 - 09:10PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
oh i can't wait for Luna to be better- and eek, Bella is bringing something out in Harry. Eeek. Can't wait for another update! Author's Response: hehe.. more up soon! cheers! bella is! Severus will help him though. luna will make a change soon

droxy	2005.02.17 - 08:13PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
what's up with Harry? (evil smirk) Author's Response: teehee... he's going through a little funky stage. Sev will help him through it in the next chapter. more up soon!! cheers

tjbaby

2005.02.17 - 08:02PM

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ooooh! Ok - my thoughts... I think back up is Viktor. Am I right? The way he reacted on seeing her. I think he still feels a lot for her and especially since that thing with her hair. My DH used to use a similar tactic before we were seeing each other as an excuse to get close. So he dreams about her huh? Wait, does he know she got married?

Harry has some more 'memories' coming through? I hope Severus can help him through this. I'm glad they sorted out the thing with Lily's ring. But really did you have to do it during consumation???

Author's Response: well technically, consumation was over with. he was still in her mind after his climax when he accidentally saw the flash. i didn't feel right about him sneaking into her mind at any other time. he was only trying to feel her feelings as he climaxed.
Harry will get through his little funky problem. he just needs to talk to severus. i think he'll be able to help sort him out.
the back up is viktor! you are right! He doesnt know yet. His dad was hurrying him, and thank goodness when she mentioned this to severus, he didnt turn into jealous!snape about it. She wants her 'friend' to know. She has no idea he feels anything else for her.

LariLee	2005.02.17 - 07:25PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
It really makes me wonder who the backup plan is... Victor or Harry. And what's going on with Harry? This is Bellatrix are so like to call her Belladominatrix. Very nicely done! ~Lisa Author's Response: It's going to be Viktor. he's the only one that still cares about hermione in that way. Harry is having some funky thoughts that he will have to deal with. Bella is such a hooch lol... more up soon! thanks~!

lovethelab	2005.02.17 - 07:23PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
I hope Harry does not really have part of the dark lord in him - maybe he just is sensative to brain waves and just read Bellatrix' mind (yeah right I know). Who is the other powerful wizard the succubus is going to try and seduce?? Harry? Or is it Victor - is that why he showed up?? Author's Response: you are right on the money. i don't think anyone else realized it was Viktor! lol Harry's problem will be explained in the next chapter. don't worry, doll, he won't turn dark on us. it's just a bit of something from voldy left behind. he just has to deal with it the right way. the incubus will be so mad hehe... too funny, but he has a back up plan. Blast! more up soon

queenp	2005.02.17 - 06:44PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
OK, so the incubus has no chance with Hermione--Hurray! His back up plan could be interesting...Who? Will this be a who will he try to pair with hermione or will he try to make it with someone else using Hermione as the bait? could be an interesting twist...As for Harry, poor boy having to snog Bella...But I've wondered if he might not have a bit more of Voldybutt in him than ever before--he is more proficient at parslemouth, he knows just what to say to Bella, he considered albeit briefly taking Bella hard and fast and then the specific thoughts were obviously not his own...I'd like to know that he doesn't have to worry about the power of evil overcoming him...Draco is an interesting topic in his own right...I like the nice guy side of him here...I like that he is one of the "good guys" in this story...I personally don't care for the DM/RW pairing, but then again, I like my men straight...I would like to believe that he has developed an overly intense sense of compassion and loyalty to his new friends. As for the chapter, excellent work...glad your beta is back, give her some chocolate for being so wonderful...Chapter is well thought out and well written. I can't wait to see what is next...Update again soon.(After all you had time to write more since your beta was out for a bit...) handing choco bar to author with reprimand to share with most excellent beta) Author's Response: ok let's see.. where to start? lol... incubus, he will fail with hermione (he just doesnt know it yet). So, he is going to search out a bloke that still carries a bit of a torch for her. wink* Harry does have a bit of voldemort in him and i think severus will be able to help him out there. it's nothing odd or anything. next chapter will explain that (though the research is taking forever). Harry will not turn into a bad guy in this fic. Pretty much the only slash pairing that i like for draco is a harry one. that won't happen here though. hehe.. slash doesn't bother me. in fact, is not with Hermione, then he'd better be with harry (LMAO) or I won't read it. muahahahaha As far as Ron/Draco, well, that is going to be something that I will leave to everyone's imagination. We still have Luna to think of after all. my lovely beta, nay, will accept the chocolate hehe I did write a good bit while she was out. unfortunately, not as much as I should have. I worked on another one shot, and I spent time with my own orignial work. More up soon. xoxooxox cheers!

HarryPotterSNL	2005.02.17 - 06:24PM	35: Chapter Thirty Five	Signed
wow, it started out good, tho it's not good that they fought about the ring...i want some more lemons soon, without fights. And I really want to see how Harry handles things with Bella and why he needs severus immediately. that will be interesting...it's interesting and grooss at the same time how bella is attracted to harry and harry better not cheat on Ginny! that would not be cool and it would just add to another problem going on in this fic. And I hope they fix luna soon, I cant wait to see ron and luna together when she's all better. so Update soon! Author's Response: More up in the next chapter. Ginny has a few issues to work on. Harry needs Severus to help him deal with his new 'problem.' I think they will be able to help Luna (mostly). Bella's days are numbered (hehe).

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