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Reviews for The Succubus

shalimar19812006.06.28 - 08:44PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Wow! I finally finished your story today after many days of fitting reading time around my baby's feeding times. I must say you've done an awsome job. The mythology of the Succubus, how you've fleshed out characters that didn't have much 'screen time' in the books and all those twists and turns! Bah! When I grow up I want to write like you. ;) I'm working on my first fic and it's nowhere near as good as what you have done with The Succubus. It was truly a pleasure reading it and I can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Sorry it's taken so long to respond. :) ~hugs for your little one~

MorganMalfoy2006.06.27 - 08:51AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
amazingly indepth story can't wait to read the next part. will definately be waiting to see what happens with Harry/Ginny, Lucius/Narcissa, and with Krum and his son. it should definately turn out to be quite a ride if it's anything like this one. loved the Greek mythology you added in with so much detail, would love to know where the info was found so I can read into it some more.

Author's Response: I looked up things about Merlin, Succubi, and some other things. I don't quite remember the links now, but I think in some of the author's notes in one of the chapters, there were some nods to a few places. :) I should start work on the sequel soon.

LaScimmia2006.06.22 - 10:47AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Fabulous story, Southern!! Wonderful stuff :))))

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. :)

angelnomiko2006.06.16 - 01:11AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
wow that was a great story i love it ... i cant wait in till part two comes out ...it was awesome .. please please more soon and in till then keep up the awesome work ..later for now angel

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I appreciate it. :)

Megan Consoer2006.06.13 - 08:04PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Author's Response: .....

greeneyeschip2006.06.11 - 05:11AM18: Chapter EighteenSigned
This was a really beautiful chapter - I just loved how Snape in his home just realising that (I know what I'll say is corny, but true) Hermione is his 'spring' and then he realise that he has to be strong and attempts to pick himself up and face everyone/Hermione. Also, I liked the interaction with the staff - they are a lively lot aren't they ;)

Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks. I wanted the staff to be a part of the story with more than just a passing comment now and then. Doesn't hurt to give them some spunk. Teehee

greeneyeschip2006.06.11 - 04:51AM16: Chapter SixteenSigned
Well, that was interesting thing about Lord Potter. *smirks* I haven't heard that one before! I really liked this chapter as it was a very dark alternate world - and unusual. Man, isn't Snape really evil and crazy in this chapter? But you have portrayed that really well as it concides with his role as a Death Eater. I'm glad that alternate world is only a dream...or is it not? *shudders at the thought of Lord Potter - now that's scary*

Author's Response: I love the whole Lord Potter plot. I'm such a geek for powerful Harry stuff. LOL Hope you liked what I did with it.

greeneyeschip2006.06.11 - 04:22AM14: Chapter FourteenSigned
I'm liking this twist - it has been a smooth sailing for them for awhile so the twist came at the right time. The characteristics of Snape in his anger was portrayed beautifully - I felt a bit of fear just by picturing him in his act of rage -- all that smashing of glass/table etc. Cool work!

Author's Response: yep, it was about time to put something in there. :)

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