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| Arwen999 | 2005.01.10 - 04:40PM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
| Chapter 10 was brilliant! I loved the whole thing, the incubus and the succubus (and the way Hermione and Severus chased them away). Oh, and the part before is as realistic as before (I'm talking about Hermione's questions, which are normal because she's really inexperienced.) Again, good job!
About Severus' birthday's date. Now you mention it, I remember I read it somewhere in your story. But I didn't know it was information given by Rowling. What is the exact date? (I mean, beginning, or end of the year?) I'm searching for this information for long [important for the time-line in my own story], and since I thought you had made this date up, I didn't really pay attention to the day it was. Author's Response: It's January 9th. The estimated year by most is 1960 (Rowling said that in book five he was 35 or 36). Hope that helps! | |||
| charmed_nay | 2005.01.10 - 04:11PM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
| Sevvie, First of all, I am quite honored that you would choose me for your beta. Thank you. This story was great the first time I read it. As you have expounded on your ideas it has become an even better work of art. You are a truly gifted writer and have a flair for keeping your readers interested and begging for more. I have truly enjoyed watching the character’s relationship develop as the story unfolds and look forward to the next chapters in this adventure you have blessed us with. Forever your faithful reader, Nay. Author's Response: AWWW!! Mah sweet little Mione! Hehehe! Thanks, doll! I trust in you, i say! I'll be putting some more pages your way shortly. It means a lot that you take the time to do this for me :) | |||
| blasphemae | 2005.01.10 - 03:57PM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
| Capricorns rock! I'm a cappy myself. December 30th. Heh. Anyway, great chapter(s). :) Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Thanks much!! | |||
| Maggie | 2005.01.10 - 03:56PM | 8: Chapter Eight | Signed |
| Yea baby!!! Author's Response: lol hehe | |||
| compulsivelyObsessive | 2005.01.10 - 03:51PM | 8: Chapter Eight | Signed |
| Well, it's a climax and therefore it is implicitly anticlimactic. That hardly makes sense when I write it down but my meaning is that the anticipation is the good part, everything past that is just icing. Though I must say that it was particularly anticlimatic. No mention of weather whatsoever apart from the reference to sunshine from the fake window. I shouldn't tease but those type of wee errors are endearing. Lemons? Dissappointing? No, my dear. Never. Innocent lemons are a different sub-specie though and are definitely not what we're used to. However, different is never a bad thing and I found the innocent lemons to be very sweet. Thank you for sharing you drugged lemons.
-cO Author's Response: lol... >>giggling as usual<< sunshine = nice weather? lol winks | |||
| Arwen999 | 2005.01.10 - 03:49PM | 9: Chapter Nine | Signed |
| "It was definitely the start of something great." -> hey, that's what I thought when I read your first chapter! ^^ I love the exchange between Severus and Harry in chapter 9. I also love a lot of things (the whole chapter in fact), especially the closeness between Severus and Hermione. So I'll jump hungrily on chapter 10!^^ Author's Response: thanks! I like to see Harry and Sev get on as well. Happy Reading! | |||
| compulsivelyObsessive | 2005.01.10 - 03:32PM | 7: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Good job. Short review. Lemons ahead. Can't wait. Obviously. Sound like Tarzan. You cheetah. Dealer cheetah. Or something. Me ridiculous. Go next chapter now.
-cO Author's Response: lol! enjoy! | |||
| TRE | 2005.01.10 - 03:23PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| I forgot to mention Hooch in the last review. That comment definately got a snicker from me. What a bizarre coupling that would have been.
In this chapter I think that you're Ron is IC in that he definately does NOT think before opening his mouth! Author's Response: lol! thanks. Ron is always so much fun to write hehe | |||
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