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Reviews for The Succubus

WiccaWitch2006.01.30 - 01:18PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
this story is amazing, and somehow I feel it started as one story and has transformed into something else entirely. A good something and I'm enjoying it, having a problem stopping reading, but just had to say, love it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are liking it. It does take off in a different direction, but it will circle back.

casey2006.01.13 - 12:31AM31: Chapter Thirty OneSigned
Glory Hallelujah. About time we see Harry as a Legilimens. That just has to be one of the 'gifts' he got from LV. It's also good Harry realizes he is walking a very dangerous very seductive line and that he needs Severus to help him control it. This of course begs the question of whether Severus will have any control or will that come down to Hermione? Fab story! Have to keep reading, don't I? casey

Author's Response: Hermione needs to be around for both of them. You'll see. Hehehe! This Harry is very special to me. I adore him and am happy that someone else does, too. :)

casey2006.01.12 - 03:48PM23: Chapter Twenty ThreeSigned
This chapter stands out as the best single chapter I've yet read on this site. I actually cried reading the Albus/Severus scene and I didn't even cry at the end of HBP Ch.27 although I was terribly stunned and had to put the book down for an hour before I could continue. So, I loved this scene because Snape at long last gets one of the things he can't quite admit to himself he needs. I'm also very intrigued with the plot line about Harry's negative emotions spilling over into atmospheric effects. It was just a puzzling thing in the Dream Potion chapter but its importance (I think?) was punctuated in the previous chapter by Snape's reaction that he would have gasped if it had been anyone besides Harry. I like the mentoring relationship developing between SS/HP; you've written it very believably. Oh hell! If I list all the things I like I'll never get back to the story. I'm very, very new to the world of fanfic, still floundering a little trying to select things to read even on this site which I am so glad I found. Anyway, I got totally wrapped up in your "Luring the Enchantress" and needed something to read while waiting for the next chapter (which I'll not harass you about since the last one was posted only two days ago); I've wandered a few places, tried this and that, but when I'm really ready to read I've come back to this site, clicked on your penname and picked another story. If we could rate favorite authors (in addition to chapters, not instead of), I would give you a bunch of 10's for all the recent reading enjoyment you've provided for me. casey / Jan, who also very much identifies with Rolanda's advice

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate that. I've been in quite a personal funk lately with real life issues, and I've not truly given myself time or enough patience to update Luring just yet. But I will start on that tomorrow. (My lovely beta was questioning me about it tonight.) I'm quite partial to this story. This was my first story that I started posting here, and I'm happy that it has been mostly well-received. The sequel is about SS/HG, but it more centered around Harry. So a lot of what is in here will come to play in the next. I always did like a Harry that was willing to tamper with things a bit and one that gets along with Snape... mostly.

whatamasquerade2005.12.30 - 01:51PM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
I love this story. And I think you've really gotten Ron down especially in the last few chapters. He's hilarious.

Author's Response: thank you! I'm happy that you like it!

SS Lupin2005.12.29 - 08:28PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Once again, lovely story. The romance was good, and the Succubus story became an actual strong plot instead of being an excuse for Snape & Hermione to be together. DId I mention that your story was excellent? And the longest ever? *wipes forehead* Happy writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm happy you enjoyed it. I do still plan a sequel... one day. :) Ruddy Succubus and her plans. Teehee

SS Lupin2005.12.25 - 10:51PM20: Chapter TwentySigned
"Filius told me in bed… uh… just earlier" Random comment which was hilarious! And the rest of your story is greatness as well.

Author's Response: Teehee. I love it when someone catches on to my silly humor! :)

Mirlanthiriel2005.12.21 - 02:53PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Great story!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

whitedragon2352005.12.19 - 12:35AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
(Slumps back in chair) finally!! After all this time, I was able to finish reading this absolutly wonderful story!!!! It quickly became a favorite and I will certainly make sure to add it to my favorites list. And DAMN!!! You kept the every one in-character, you made the chapters at a reasonable length, and you followed the canon universe well. Might I just say that a round of applause is in order! Kudos to you. And I hope to see a sequel. As I am very curious as to what will come about with Krum and the succubus. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! (thats right.....I said Christmas!!!)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I do still plan the sequel, but I've put it off for now. There are so many things that I need to tie up. Cheers! Happy Christmas to you!

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