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Ezmerelda2005.01.30 - 12:51AM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Three cheers for Draco, taking fallatio in the line of duty! :) It's a good thing that Marietta isn't the sharpest tack in the box, now they know that Higgs is behind it, and that he wants all the players to be in the village. Forewarned is forearmed. Thanks for writing! ~"~

Author's Response: thanks doll! uh huh, he took one for the team, teehee... gotta love it. marietta is pretty dumb, isn't she? more up soon

Betz2005.01.29 - 10:47PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Marietta screwing Steward, Higgs and now playing with Draco? THE TRAMP! (Snicker) Severus, you are SUCH a tease! Not "Bastard," you mean "Rat bastard!" Hermione let him off light. Binding spells and a lust potion are in order for that man, teach him to tease the poor animals. "If you have an erection lasting more than four hours, please seek medical attention immediately." Let him suffer for five hours...I am mean. Well, now we see with this chapter who is playing whom more clearly. Another good chapter.

Author's Response: hehe...that was terrible of him, wasn't it? as far as marietta....yes, that ho! blah, i say! she'll get hers though. more up soon

LariLee2005.01.29 - 10:44PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Wonderful, complex job, Southern. You're spoiling me.
~Lisa

Author's Response: thanks so much! more up soon.

Arwen9992005.01.29 - 09:42PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Hi again! Good chapter! [quote]"Ron nodded, smiling broadly. “It’s nice to have someone that cares, you know? Doesn’t matter that I don’t have much to offer. By the time she graduates, I hope to have a good job and maybe a flat on my own.”[end of quote] I find touching that Ron has someone to love who doesn't care about his poorness. I really like it!!! Oh, and yes, that lemon was really odd (but I'm rather prude), but it was ok. BTW I really don't like Marietta. What a b*** Sorry, I had to say it. This girl (as Bellatrix) represents the kind of woman I hate in life. Everything in her revolts me! (But the story was still good without that). Anyway, go on!!! ^^ (P.S. My new chapter(s) has (have?) been updated. I thought I had to tell you.)

Author's Response: I think it's sweet about Ron as well. About the lemon, teehee... Marietta is a wench!! she'll get hers though. Glad to hear that your story is updated; i'm definitely going to go check it out as soon as I can stay out of bed more than a few minutes at a time. I've been sick lately.. blah! lol... more up soon! cheers!

queenp2005.01.29 - 09:30PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
*whimper* Please let that be Draco trying to beat down the door...He had better have resisted the Imperio from Marietta...Also, Steward must not be too good at teaching DADA if he can't resist Imperio...Well done, as before. Looking forward to more...Have a treat *holding chocolate bar to author* update again ASAP!

Author's Response: Yes, it's Draco! About Steward though, he's the Muggles Studies Professor. Dumbledore is filling in for the bloke that left the DADA slot vacant. more up soon! thanks so much!

Azulkan22005.01.29 - 08:43PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Severus pissed me off, not got much use for a man that does that to a woman. And the bull about later. He deserves a swift kick it the balls. Other than that a good chapter. Waiting to see what Draco has to say.

Author's Response: lol.. i would have been mad as well... is why i let mione steam a bit! and.. he didn't even ask about her class? that jerk, eh? he'll get an earful on it... hehe we'll start off with draco next

Piggie2005.01.29 - 08:38PM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
I always get to a cliffy when my eyes can stay open no more - and you update so quickly! (which is good, but I'll never catch up!!!) Damn, i'm going to be late for work in the morning - i just know it!!

Author's Response: lol! blasted evil cliffies!! i try to update each day (when the powers that be allow it). cheers!

SeverusGal2005.01.29 - 07:44PM27: Chapter Twenty SevenSigned
Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens with Bella! Update soon!

Author's Response: will do! thank you much!

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