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Morgan012005.09.22 - 09:45AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Wonderful story. I really do like the idea of Bella in snake form. Do you think she can be trusted? I don't know, but I like the idea of it though. Thanks again for such an enthralling read.

Author's Response: i think she can be trusted for now. She wants to be harry's "girl" though. I think she has this thing about wanting to be the most powerful wizard's love interest. hehehe

aussie mel2005.09.13 - 09:05AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Hey, I love this story. I've had it bookmarked for awhile on my to read list and finnally got around to reading it, and I am glad that I did. It is a truly magnificent story. You kept the characterisations true to canon and made their reactions beleivable. I loved the whole story line with the Succubus. I've always loved the Snape/Hermione couple and you showed me exactly WHY i love it. You did a marvoulus job on it by going into depth on the other characters lives it made for a much more enjoyable story. I also loved the Draco/Ron/Luna angle. I've never been much of a fan of Lucius Draco or Hooch but i loved how you protrayed each. Expecially Hooch, i've always seen her as being a bit creepy but i could so see her how you described her. I slao loved how yoou showed the staff interaction. You are a truly wonderful author and i hope to see much more from you soon. I can't wait until the sequal is done so i can see what happens next. Thanks for a wonderful story. Cya Aussie Mel

Author's Response: thanks! Glad you've enjoyed it. The Draco/Ron/Luna bit wasn't planned at first, but I did have fun with them. Oh! I always love to muck around with Lucius and Hooch! hehe Thanks for reading and letting me know how you felt about things. I appreciate! Cheers

hippo2005.09.12 - 05:54PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
brilliant!!! read it all in one go. some bits seem odd to me - like everyone marrying at 18 and going straight to kids, but guess it had to be for the story line. love all the changes you did to harry with all the parselmouth and dark magic. great way of bringing hermione back. wouldve loved to get some more ron/draco action as well. i also felt as though hagrid was left out too much. i think - for originality reasons - hagrid shouldve had rolanda's attention and opposite, but i liked what you did with hooch. it was fun. i just joined your group to see if you wrote that sequel yet, as i have no idea when you wrote this.. hope there is something more to enjoy! really, well done! i'd say the best potter fanfic i read so far :) congrats

Author's Response: thanks, dear. yeah, I needed the kids for the ruddy prophecy. lol... it's only hermione and harry though. ron and the others aren't getting married. :)

I love Madame Hooch! She's fun to manipulate in my eyes. The lady that played her character in the movie just made my day. I sort of pull from her. The sequel isn't up yet. I sort of lost heart in it after HBP, but I do intend to have it. :) Thank you so much!

QIK2005.09.07 - 06:38PM29: Chapter Twenty NineSigned
Holy crap... That was quite intense. Everytime I read a completed story I read on until I've finished and leave a kinda summary review for the last chapter. But I really felt the urge to get these grieving feelings out of my system. There's no chance of recovery for Luna, is there? No Severus and Hermione come up with some wonderful potions/transfiguration combination which will reform all wizardkind and save the poor girl? I suppose not. Your story is so f***in realistic until now and that led me to the conclusion that I have to deal with Luna's withering and her inevitable death. That's life after all. Poor Ron, I hope he will get over this one day. First love... and then lost to that evil woman. I truly hate Bellatrix, I really do. I hope all turns out well, or as well as possible. I don't know yet if I like that "new Morsmordre" stuff. Reminds me too much of Severus' dream reality and Harry as a new dark lord. Hell, that seems as if it was years ago. I'm impressed. That's really a hell of a good fic. Patrick

Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking this story. If you've continued to read on, I'm certain your questions ahve been answered. Just in case.. Luna will get better :) And, yes, Bella, is very bad news! Lord Potter... muahaha... too funny. Enjoy the rest and thank you for letting me know your thoughts!

kie2005.08.18 - 09:41PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
I posted a review already, and I know that you're a little hesitant to do a sequel after the shocker in HBP. However, for people like me who are just a little bit more than obsessed with SevHerm pairings, when we find an author of such a high caliber as you, we can't help but long for more works. After reading the book, I understood why you were so apprehensive about doing a part two, but you really must do it!

Author's Response: Thank you. It would be a pity to not do it, especially since I do have it planned out. I am the same. I love HG/SS...period. lol Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate that. I shall try to work with it soon.

thora riley2005.08.11 - 05:59PM1: Chapter OneSigned
wow! your an awsome writer... if this was published id buy it

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on some other things. Have you seen Vengeance is Sweet or Luring the Enchantress?

Moepi2005.08.09 - 05:02PM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
Hm wrap up your WIP's and bring on the sequel. I really love this story. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks. It was a long, fun ride. :)

Aurora2005.08.09 - 03:42AM3: Chapter ThreeSigned
"The two were molting together in his mind." Now, seriously, you don't mean they were both shedding their feathers at the same time, do you? ; ) Perhaps "melding" (as in "combining" or "blending together") was the word you sought. Very interesting story. I've never read one before which uses this idea to get them together. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: lol!!! too right. I do believe I'm going to run in and fix that. I must say I'm laughing loudly. Thank you!

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