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procrastinatordh2005.04.04 - 01:56AM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
omg lol draco ron and luna you should deff have the 3 of them stay together!

Author's Response: lol... good deal! thanks

Fictionlover_322005.04.03 - 07:56PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
Very sneaky! I never expected Ron, Draco and Luna to be together at all! I never saw it coming! And you did it without our knowledge! I don't know if I should be laughing or not, because I'm not comfortable with a polyandry relationship. So, on that note, I'm glad you didn't go into details! I'm surprised Luan even participated in the first place! She seems not the type, but then again, a person could surprise you. I wonder how Lucius will take it? I know he's not supposed to know but you can't keep secrets for long in life. He's bound to find out somehow, hope he doesn't disowns Draco or anything like that. Oh well, guess we'll never know. This was a sneaky chapter for me. Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: Hehehe.. uh huh. I was wondering how many people I caught by surprise. As far as Draco, Luna, and Ron, I think this works. Each ship gets what they want that way (r/l and d/r anyway). To be quite honest, I was going to kill off Luna when Percy died, but alas, the people spoke. I'll not go into details with the trio any more than I have before though. I think I will stop trying to please everyone though. It seems no matter what you do, someone still doesn't like something. lol

As far as Draco's parents, Lucius won't make a big deal out of him. He knows that his son will eventually do what he needs to do. I don't think his mum would like that his son his shagging his best mates girl while his mate shags her as well. hahaha. She won't know, I suppose. As far as Luna, my perception of her makes me think that she'd be up for just about anything. Someone who wears butterbeer caps for a necklace? Reads upside down? Yeah, she'd experiment. hahaha... And, what? No comment on Harry? muahahha.. wasn't that just something else? more up soon! cheers~ :)

SylvaniaSnape2005.04.03 - 06:39PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
wicked...

Author's Response: **giggle** mmhmm

queenp2005.04.03 - 06:30PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
Excellent chapter, as always...loved the explanations--the triangle, the wedding (which was a hoot!), the scene w/Bellatrix...all excellent. Update again soon!

Author's Response: thanks, doll. more up soon!

lovethelab2005.04.03 - 05:59PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
Well, looks like everybody is just getting it on. has me wondering if it si in the water or if Barry White is the new professor of music! :-) I hope the succubus does not hurt Viktor - even if he was sort of a pain when he met with Hermione and Severus. (Not like Severus helped any) Can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: more up soon, doll! thanks! yep.. lots o sex going on huh? makes you wonder if they really do sneak around so much.. well, hell, of course they do! hahaha... i remember some tales from my school days. sigh.. lol... cheers!

compulsivelyObsessive2005.04.03 - 03:37PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
Ooooh. I love you and your updates. This was such an awesomely sparklicious chapter. I can't wait for the next installment of this sexy story. Severus and Hermione are so darling. And thank God for Betz's idea for polyandry, I don't want anyone to be left out so I'm heavily in favor of it, plus I think Lucius would think it was kind of funny. -cO

Author's Response: Uh huh... Lucius would (in this story anyway). Guess Narcissa might throw a hissy fit. lol... Glad you liked it, doll. And, yes, i'm so glad that Betz put that little bug in my head lol

blaze_of_fae2005.04.03 - 03:34PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
I am happy for r/l/d....they all deserve happiness. I am worried about Harry, was it a memory or just a nightmare or was bella in his mind messing with him even though she has no powers anymore? Update soon but don't ware yourself out. Hugs!

Author's Response: lol ty doll. you decide about the dream. hahaha... i left that up as a reader's choice. Most are opting for it to only be a dream. glad you like the trio bit. :)

Author's Response: I've been taking longer breaks. Sitting at the pc is hard for me now (even when I put my feet up). Thanks for caring though. cheers!

Betz2005.04.03 - 02:45PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
Oh my God...the wedding, the three-some, Pottermort...what a great chapter. Thanks Sunshine, but it was your writing that put the idea of Ron/Luna/Draco into my head, so it's all your idea to begin with, I just pointed the way to what seemed obvious or what I thought you were hinting at. That wedding was...weird..just weird. But it seemed so Rolanda, they way you've written her. The three-some...I want a sub-chapter, maybe a long PWP posted on The Burrow? Sounded really hot, wish Hermione caught more of it. And Harry, he's trouble. And just how many others has Harry slept with? The lemons with Severus and Hermione were great. If you ever need some first hand info about pregnancy and sex during pregnancy, email me. I remember all the details. At this point in her pregnancy, hermione should be more dry and not ready as pregnancy tends to dry you up since your body doesn't need lubrication for insemination at this point. If anything, Severus will have to make up a batch of lube for themselves. Other than that one point, great chapter.

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the chapter! The trio.. hehe... Rolanda.. hehehe.. too funny...

As far as the pregnancy, I do have a child, and as far as not being dry, I never was dry as you've said here. If anything, I was always randy and ready (even early on). Perhaps each pregnancy is different? And, the things going through Severus' mind are things my husband has said. To each his own. I kept a pregnancy journal about everything though, and I still have the "What to Expect When You're Expecting" Book. If I do have questions though, I will definitely email you.


Author's Response: as far as Harry, i'd like to think he's had a few.. lol.. Good old Tonks helped him out before the battle, and since then, he's had a few friendly quickies. lol As far as something at the Burrow, maybe so. lol I'll need to try that.

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