Reviews for The Succubus
shenaid | 2005.01.12 - 11:06AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
positively enticing
Author's Response: thanks so much!! more soon |
Winna | 2005.01.12 - 10:56AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
Well, I guess you had to do the 'meet the parents' thing - at least it was over quickly! I realy liked the dream sequence. It makes so much sense that the succubus would coerce Severus into hurting his lover. Thanks for the quick update, but I'm ready for another...
Author's Response: yay!! thanks so much! someone who agrees with the quicky parents thing! lol my sentiments exactly. on to the dreams!! thanks. more coming in a bit |
dreamlover | 2005.01.12 - 10:03AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
OOPS! Forgot to rave about the drunken professors! LMAO! Brilliant!
Author's Response: LOL!! Thanks. Darn Minerva coming in and stopping it! lol I just love Madame Hooch teehee.. what a nutter! |
dreamlover | 2005.01.12 - 10:02AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
WONDERFUL! I loved the brewing scene. It was most in character! And the meeting with her parents was good too...BUT THE DREAM! WOW! I loved it! So intense, so snarky! Quite brilliant! Looking forward to Chappie14
Oh, and the lemons were lurvely too! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, doll. Glad you lurved it. heehee.. Fourteen shouldn't be too long. have to mess with it a bit more. Dream Severus was how I envisioned him to be once. Ruthless, uncaring, calculating... lemons are always nice..hehe |
Snape Fan | 2005.01.12 - 08:18AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
And the nightmares begin - poor Severus. I'm glad her parents accepted him.
Author's Response: thanks! bit more today |
lynn_k_fletcher | 2005.01.12 - 08:13AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
Wonderful! I wondered how you would keep the story moving after the couple dispelled their nightly vistors. You've certainly succeeded in keeping my attention. Good work. Keep updating.
Author's Response: thanks! more today |
ancientgirl | 2005.01.12 - 08:00AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
I was afraid something like this would happen. I feel so bad for Severus. At least Hermione understands, but they need to get this thing out of their lives fast.
Author's Response: not much longer for potion! hehe |
blasphemae | 2005.01.12 - 05:51AM | 13: Chapter Thirteen | Signed |
Eeh. Poor Severus. I want to hug him. >.< Update again soon. :)
Author's Response: lol more today! psst... he'll be ok after a bit |
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