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Arwen9992005.01.29 - 12:17AM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
Hi again! In my previous review, I meant "Madam Hooch and Professor McGonagall." I forgot to write the last name. Anyway... Loved the discussion between Hermione and Draco. Loved the duel between Severus and Harry. Oh, and I hate Bellatrix! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: yeah! bella is a wench! glad you liked it doll.. more up tomorrow i hope

lovethelab2005.01.28 - 11:57PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
I am glad to see that Harry and Severus have come to an agreement of sorts. Thanks for updating so soon! I am enjoying this story!

Author's Response: thanks! more up tomorrow! they'll be getting along fine from now on

Arwen9992005.01.28 - 11:52PM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
Hi! I really love Jealous Sevvie! ^^ Is Harry mad? Does he want to be killed by The-One-Who-Doesn't-Want-To-Share-his-girlfriend? Oh, and I hate the fact that Madam Hooch enter Severus' bedroom like that! Little voyeurs! And I think Percy should be forced to date Umbridge for his stupid letter! Go on!!!

Author's Response: hahaha! too cute! good thinking on percy...alas, i think he's such a bad boy. more on him in chapter 29 i believe...

alphafemale2005.01.28 - 11:30PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
Bye, bye Bradley. I didn't like him much, anyway. I loved the duel. I mean, I didn't WANT to see them fight, but I loved how they both ended up laughing. The image Albus must have seen had to be hilarious. And just who does Draco want? I figured he'd fall for Hermione in the process, but maybe someone else had caught his fancy... Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: uh huh..i didn't really want one to win over the other for some reason... i like how it ended that way with albus showing up. lol. more about draco soon.

Fictionlover_322005.01.28 - 11:04PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
The battle scene with Harry and snape was good. I love battles, it makes me want to be out there fighting as well. I felt that it was funny of Harry creating that snow snake, thank goodness, it didn't attack Snape. It's really bad that the gang doesn't know what's going on. At this rate, their way behind in their information and their stretagy to deal with Bella. They better find out soon, before they lose Ginny. I hope none of the gang die. I really like them, a lot. Update soon! Cheers!

Author's Response: they'll all be up to speed soon and be prepared (or at least think they are). more up in next chapter

ancientgirl2005.01.28 - 10:09PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
At least that Bradley is gone. I didn't like him, he seemed really off. I understood his wanting an end to all Death Eaters, but he was just out there. I liked the conversation with Hermione and Severus while she wsa healing him. Very cute.

Author's Response: thanks so much... just a little tender moment!

pickles2005.01.28 - 10:02PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
tkank you for a new update. see what happens when one waits patiently a new chapter. i love the dueling. so will young higgs be able to accomodate bella. quite interesting. thank you again.

Author's Response: bella will take an interest in higgs for a bit, but she has other things on her mind

grill2005.01.28 - 09:56PM26: Chapter Twenty SixSigned
I was kind of waiting for the disposal of Bradley... Poor, ignorant fool he was... ;) As for Bella, I absolutely adore the way you write her; I honestly believe there is little or nothing that could make her weak and withdrawn. Everything she's put through just makes her more insane, and you've portrayed it perfectly. The duel between Severus and Harry was an interesting thing, and a good one because it felt necessary to have something to kind of break the ice between those two... ;) Can't wait to see what these evil lads have planned, and what parts Edgecombe and Steward plays in them, if any at all...!

Author's Response: thanks so much. i was hoping to bring bella across and one who didnt give a #$%@ about anything, no matter what. I think the two needed the duel as well. more up on the bad guys in the next chap

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