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whitedragon2352005.12.17 - 04:43PM28: Chapter Twenty EightSigned
And the plot thickens! Dun, dun, DUNNN!! OH! I loved the vid! thank you much!

Author's Response: Great!! I'm happy you liked it! Hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

whitedragon2352005.12.17 - 01:34AM25: Chapter Twenty FiveSigned
OHH!! I had asked a few chappies ago for that vid u had been talking about, and I completly forgot to give my e-mail (unless it shows up) Well here it is. Its just that....its so hard finding sev/herm videos, and this one sounded great! lunalee7@mac.com

Author's Response: Not a problem. I have more than one actually.

whitedragon2352005.12.16 - 07:13PM19: Chapter NineteenSigned
I was wondering If I could possibly get that vid? I absolutly love this story, adn the idea of a little mini movie sounds brilliant!

Author's Response: sure. click on my name on the member page and send me an email. I'll send it to you.

PANDORA RIDDLE2005.11.18 - 02:23AM20: Chapter TwentySigned
You know i think your really J.K. Rowling scarlet witch. i can keep a secret. *wink*

Author's Response: haha... how've you been?

Guinnevere2005.10.28 - 12:47AM51: Chapter Fifty One (Epilogue)Signed
This is a very, very good story! You have quite a gift for description as well as a good ear for dialogue, you write humor and drama equally well, and you even get in a few of the same kind of little jokes-in-passing that I enjoy so much in Terry Pratchett's writing. (e.g., baby Lily's mobile from 'Uncle' Harry plays a tune her father has privately dubbed 'The Harry Potter Theme.' Heh! Love it.)

Also, you win lots of points for giving us both a happy ending and a hook for a sequel. Brava!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the read and the input! Not many people commented on the mobile, but yes, muahahaha! I thought that was funny! I should have more of the sequel soon. I was hoping to finish my wip first. Cheers, dear! xoxo Hope you recieved that email. It says sent, and I've not gotten anything back yet!

Guinnevere2005.10.28 - 12:19AM50: Chapter FiftySigned
This chapter made me cry, the writing is very moving. The fact that Harry used Dark Magic to raise Hermione from the dead is quite unsettling, as is the continued threat of the Incubi/Succubi. But I'm glad our girl is back. For awhile I was afraid you were going to off her! I think a sequel is a wonderful idea -- as long as nobody 'important' bites the big one.

Author's Response: I couldn't truly off her. I'm such a sucker for happy endings! Nobody truly "important" will, but things will be a bit darker.

Guinnevere2005.10.27 - 10:26PM48: Chapter Forty EightSigned
This is an interesting chapter. Rolanda's binding to Stuart is the funniest wedding story I've ever read! I could see and hear the actors in your description and dialogue, and that just made the whole thing funnier.

Ron and Draco in a three-way relationship with Luna is thought-provoking, but it seems the Wizarding community is more broadminded than most Muggle societies. They even have a lawful binding ceremony to honor it!

The bit with Harry's thoughts and the dream has me wondering, though. He seems to be walking on a cliff's edge. It would only take one strong push in the wrong direction to send him right over. Brrrr!

Author's Response: I had fun with the wedding. The way I've depicted Rolanda here, I figured she'd be out there! hehe. Yes, more 3 way coming. :) Harry has a lot on his mind, and to be honest, in the sequel, he's not innocent Harry any longer. Sort of takes a toll on you.

Guinnevere2005.10.27 - 09:47PM47: Chapter Forty SevenSigned
This chapter has some very funny bits in it. “Draco, if a bloke and another bloke dated, how do they know which one is the bloke in the relationship?” That had me laughing out loud! Also, I like the character of Stuart and his oddly starchy romantic relationship with Rolanda. You're right, all of 'our' characters deserve to have somebody, and occasionally that means inventing somebody new. (I don't think he's really a 'Gary Stu' character, lol.)

Author's Response: lol... I like the way Ron said that, too. I could just hear him so perfectly and see his confused face. TEehee!! Glad you don't think Stuart's a Stu.. haha!!

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