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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

ancientgirl2005.04.17 - 10:17AM1: PrologueSigned
Good stuff here SW. I'm wondering myself what Severus' true intentions are. Still it would be easy enough for him to fool Voldemort, as long as Dumbledore knows what's going on. Although I suspect our Potions Master will be keeping one thing a secret for a bit longer.

Author's Response: thanks, doll. I was wondering how you've been, but I saw on your story that real life had you busy. glad to see you! He will definitely be keeping this little secret for a while :)

LariLee2005.04.17 - 09:49AM1: PrologueSigned
Definitely an excellent start! You will eventually let us know which side Severus is truly on, won't you?
~Lisa

Author's Response: sure thing!! I'll throw out some hints along the way. more up as soon as i can

SusanDara2005.04.17 - 09:42AM1: PrologueSigned
WOW! This is the beginning of another killer story. The tension and style you have created in your writing is definietly developing again. I can't wait to see where you are taking us on this story's ride. I like this depection of Severus. I think that this type of vascillation of character traits hits the mark for the way that I've read him in the books. WELL DONE! BRAVO

Author's Response: thanks, susan! I'm trying ... hehe... this one is going to be one of my faves, I think. I'm going to try to keep that same tone throughout. more up soon xoxoxo

Threesisters2005.04.17 - 09:12AM1: PrologueSigned
I'ts a good start, I like the fact you are still unaware if Severus is playing good spy or evil spy. I sometimes feel sorry for Ron, he always seems to be held up against Severus, a young boy or a very fine specimen of a man, No contest. Will look forward to the next update, hopefully soon.

Author's Response: I feel sorry for Ron too sometimes. I had to play him, like you said, as the inexperienced boy that roughly fumbles around. hehe more up soon xxoox

Rainbow2005.04.17 - 08:53AM1: PrologueSigned
Nicely done, and you make it seem as if Snape doesn't particularly care for either of his "masters" over the other. Will eagerly await updates.

Author's Response: right! we'll not know for a while who he likes more .. lol (if either) xoxoo

linzsnape2005.04.17 - 07:47AM1: PrologueSigned
I like your style

Author's Response: thanks linz. more up as soon as i can

silkysoul772005.04.17 - 04:17AM1: PrologueSigned
a promising beginning, and a very well written one at that! I like the way you characterize Severus - feels right to me. God knows that in many other stories he's superficial enough. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! he'll stay like this throughout the fic :) more up soon xoxoxo

Inspire2005.04.17 - 03:19AM1: PrologueSigned
You're doing a great job with the ambiguity of Snape's loyalties. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. i've a few things planned for the next chapter

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