Reviews for Luring the Enchantress
June W | 2005.11.06 - 10:38PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
Bella can bite the dust along with Nagini and Voldy and Death Eaters - but NOT SEVERUS AND HERMIONE!!! Hmm, Bill and Fleur? Gabrielle? Other Weasleys? Other students? Harry needs to win so Severus and Hermione can be together and get married - no more "concubine" status and living under threat of Cruciatus. BTW, betas don't need sleep..... (snerk!)
Author's Response: lol... Bella has an important role in the next chapter. I hope you appreciate it. teehee I try to touch upon most of our main characters in the next bit. :) |
GinnyW | 2005.11.06 - 10:34PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
I can't wait to read more. I'm glad that Hermione had some time to think on what Severus' motives... though they do still need to have a nice long chat... if they ever get the chance, that is. I think that they all have prophecies to fulfill. Thanks for posting, hon! ~Gin
Author's Response: yep... prophecies abound! Teehe! More up now. I hope you like it. *wink* |
angeLicaLLy_me | 2005.11.06 - 10:34PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
you are evil...loving it by the way,and i can't wait to see who wins. i want harry to win, but really who doesnt want that...hope its an exciting ending!
Author's Response: I am quite happy with the chapter, though part of it saddens me. I hope you like it. |
queenp | 2005.11.06 - 10:13PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
you are an evil woman at times...why did you have to stop it there? I want to know what happens next. UPDATE again SOON!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am so wicked, huh? I stopped it there because to do otherwise would have led to a worse cliffie! hehe! more up. hope you enjoy! |
Dancer15 | 2005.11.06 - 10:12PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
Ahhh! The anticipation is building and I can hardly stand it. Which side will Severus end up fighting for? Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Update Soon! :)
Author's Response: It's up now. I do hope you enjoy it. We will see exactly whose side Severus is on... Are will we? :) |
cocoachristy | 2005.11.06 - 09:38PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
Excellant as always, my dear. I am glad Hermione is somewhat conflicted and seeing both sides. She wants to be disgusted, but is finding it hard to be. Its hard for her, with her morals, but she does love Severus and knows she will have to accept him the way he is.
The final battle? Well, I am pulling for Harry, of course. I hate to predict any deaths, in my fantasy land all the good guy live, even though I know that won't happen! Tee Hee!
Just have to mention...Loved the portrait! Shagging portraits! Too funny!! Good job!
xoxoxox
Author's Response: I know! LOL... Portraits shag? TMI! hehe! No, some good guys do have to bite the dust I'm afraid. Hermione has bigger things to worry on now. You shall see what I mean. The chapter is now up. |
wartcap | 2005.11.06 - 09:21PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
Hermione's a sensible girl, I'm glad she didn't dwell on Rodolphus's demise too long.
Excellent use of the parchment, I want one of those *waves hand* "Locus lottery result for next Saturday..."
It was really exciting when Harry and Hermione were trying to find a way to contact the Headmaster. I was reading really quickly, all excited, cheering when Dobby arrived, now there's a compliment to the addictivness of your writing!
Predictions for the final battle. Hmmm...I have suspected that you might have Voldemort win, mainly because we have seen the dark side of the Potions Master and done some housekeeping pre-battle clearing out the inner circle ranks. No, that's contradictory. Harry will have to win because Lucius would be a liability if found and we have a prophecy to be fulfilled.
What of those sneaky Centaurs? They faded from the story?Overdosed on Mallow?
Ty for the line break tip, I feel so much tidier within my little review box now! ;-)
Author's Response: Hahaha! OverD on Mallow! I'm giggling. They make an appearance. And line breaks rules! I am quite happy that you are enjoying my story. I had fun with the Dobby part. You are quite close in your guess. You shall see what I mean. The chapter is up. :) |
shdwcat27 | 2005.11.06 - 09:18PM | 28: Prelude to a War | Signed |
Brilliant chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope you enjoy the next. |
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