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| droxy | 2005.10.04 - 08:38PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| thanks for the great chapter!
this line made me bust out laughing "Not even Lupin would be able to discern what had gone on, the nosey bastard."
Author's Response: teehee... Glad to make you laugh! Thanks, my dear! | |||
| Rashtash | 2005.10.04 - 07:49PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Rashinka and Natasha
This is soooooo good! We love the way you describe things. But can you perhaps make Hermione's character stronger? She seems to always bend at Severus's will and looks like a weakling. We think that the story could be even better than it is now if you sometimes make her disobey him. A strong female character coupled with a strong male character sounds good. There is more room for conflict! Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. About Hermione, she'll come into her own and make a stand on Snape soon enough. In fact, in the chapter that I am about to upload, she gives him the what for. However, I'm portraying Hermione as I see fit. She's only 18, and an affair with an older, more experienced man is quite intimidating at first, especially one like Snape, so it just takes a while for her to really feel comfortable enough to tell him how she feels. At least I've not made her as petulant as she was in HBP though.. hehe... I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Are you new to Ashwinder? I see you created the id recently. I'm uncertain if you are a regular reviewer or not. Either way, welcome. I'm always so suspicious. lol | |||
| kirien | 2005.10.04 - 07:41PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| enjoying your story Author's Response: thank you very much. more up shortly | |||
| bellasol67 | 2005.10.04 - 07:30PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Frankly, I'm surprised that Snape gave Hermione that parchment, at least one that was so revealing ...I wonder what she will do when she looks at that and it shows how is feeling when something bad happens to Harry, or when he is at Voldemorts side going through some hex or whatever...I don't know, it just seems like his little gift could backfire, of course, I am probably just reading to much into it. Draco, bless his little snobby-pureblood heart. I thought the EVENT was wonderful...Hermione's reactions seem appropriate and my oh my what is that feeling that Snape is feeling? Dare we say l-o-v-e? LOL! I have no suggestions or requests... we've come 24 chapters and you have yet to disappoint ...I'm happy being at your mercy! Author's Response: That one gift should speak volumes... At least she knows the extent of his feelings, having such a revealing bit of information. The gift will come into play though soon. It's quite important to be honest! :( I'm glad you liked the EVENT hehe... I was worried on it. I do believe that Snape loves her. He's only a little thick in recognizing it so far. More up in a few minutes. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Cheers! | |||
| Titania | 2005.10.04 - 07:12PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Hummmm! I wonder who it was listning to George and Mione talking. As to wether or not this chapter was a let down...erm no. Very realistic actually. Nicely done, as always! Live long and prosper, Titania Author's Response: The culprit will admit what they heard in the next chapter! lol I'm quite happy that you liked it, my dear! More up in a few minutes! | |||
| looneyluna | 2005.10.04 - 07:08PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Ah! Relief at last after twenty-three chapters....Kudos to you! Very well done! Author's Response: teehee! Thank you so much for having a read! glad you're liking it, and I hope you continue to. | |||
| June W | 2005.10.04 - 07:05PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Requests: dump the "George" line and tell Ginny to mind her own business! And can Draco send his mum a message through Severus or other non-dangerous means? Thank you for EVENT! More EVENTS coming up? (PS - contraceptive?) Author's Response: The George story was dumped already when he said that he truly fancied another. Gin and Hermione do have a good talk in the next though. Draco, unfortunately, won't be sending his mum a message. However, we do see her first in the next chapter. More events soon. Also, the contraceptive potion, as I mentioned last chapter's review, will be discussed her. Worry not. No preggie Hermione here. | |||
| Stormi | 2005.10.04 - 06:51PM | 24: Holiday: Part 2 | Signed |
| Great chapter. More soon please. Author's Response: Thank you! I have more to upload in just a minute! Cheers | |||
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