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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Crescentmoon2005.09.21 - 12:57PM22: The TruthSigned
Yay for alone time. :) I love this fic and how super great you are about updating! Thank you :)

Author's Response: Alone time rocks! Glad you are enjoying. I hit a rut in updating. I'm back though. lol

PhoneixTears2005.09.21 - 07:00AM22: The TruthSigned
Twitching in chair. A real enjoyable read. More, more, more, soon???

Author's Response: yeppers! more up later today! woohoo

fyiagcg2005.09.21 - 12:45AM22: The TruthSigned
oh, darling. it was worth the wait!!! i've just read the past 3 chapters and you are a teasing temptress to leave me hanging like this!!! i'm glad you and yours are ok after the hurricane. and i'll even thank the hurricane if it can be attributed to you writing more =)... anyway, my only bit of concrit is that towards the end of lupin's point of view, it got a little confusing which witch he was referencing. especially in the last paragraph...
He needed to know what she’d known and why she hadn’t told him. It wasn’t just that she hadn’t told him of their location. She hadn’t told her family or friends either. Molly and Arthur had taken her disappearance especially hard. It was only right that he find out exactly what she knew.
i think it's specifically the line 'molly and arthur had taken her disappearance' as that, i assume, refers to ginny, but in the end of the sentence, he'll find out what who knew?
anyway, that's my little bit of criticism. even with it, I LOVE YOU!!!! and look forward to more updates of this fantastic story.

Author's Response: thanks, sweets. I'm going to go clear that up. I did note that when I proofed it, and being so familiar with the vision in my head, I just shook it off, thinking would be okay. But yes, if needs fixing. I'm glad you are still enjoying the tale! Not too much longer for the teasing.

JenKM12162005.09.20 - 11:57PM22: The TruthSigned
I love this story! More fun to come soon? Sounds exciting! I can't wait! I feel so sorry for Remus! He really is confused. I'm looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Remus will have a happy ending. I promise. glad you are enjoying. more up tonight!

aelwyne2005.09.20 - 11:00PM22: The TruthSigned
Great! Your chapters are my reward for working all day :) I can't wait for the holidays!!!!

Author's Response: :) thanks! i have more that I'm uploading this evening. hope you enjoy

redhanded2005.09.20 - 10:34PM22: The TruthSigned
I just wanted to say that I am very much addicted to this story and I can't wait for an update. Please hurry!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying my tale. I have more to post this evening. thank you

Jadeous2005.09.20 - 08:07PM22: The TruthSigned
Mmm naughty Severus... and Harry too, plotting for secret trysts during the holidays. *giggle* I love it.

Author's Response: the holidays shall be enjoyable!! hehe more up this evening

SeverusSnape2005.09.20 - 06:43PM22: The TruthSigned
Yay! I love this chapter! Severus talks so naughty!!! . . I love it! Can't wait till you update!

Author's Response: He's bad... I do love it though! hehe more up this evening

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