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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

fynnsmom2010.04.22 - 06:34PM5: Falling Into PlaceSigned
I think a big passionate kiss would have been inappropriate here. I think the little kisses were better. I admit I am curious about what Neville wanted and who was following Hermione. I think I like it that Severus refers to Hermione as "his witch." Great chapter.

fynnsmom2010.04.22 - 05:01PM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I like how the Dark Lord hisses when he says Severus' name. Nope, I don't think Severus killed Higgs--I think Voldemort did. I'm not really buying Ginny's crushing on Remus and hating Tonks so much--although there are others who have written Ginny like that. I will, however, go with that for now since it fits in with the story. And it's too early to tell what you really have planned for Remus or Ginny or anyone else. Great chapter.

fynnsmom2010.04.22 - 12:05PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
I'm so glad you didn't leave Hermione friendless. The break-up with Ron worked. You left it open so they could get back together. I loved the lavender rose and the note. Some day it will all become clear to Hermione. Great chapter.

fynnsmom2010.04.22 - 11:32AM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
Snape is very Slytherin--what else can I say? It's bad of me but I'm glad that if you had to kill someone off, it was Hagrid and his brother. I don't think I've ever read a story where anyone's done that. I wonder if Hermione will one day discover that Severus has her knickers:D I don't mind that you portray Ron in this way--he's a teenaged boy--it seems normal. Severus is just so crafty. Ron is no match for him. Great chapter.

fynnsmom2010.04.22 - 10:48AM1: PrologueSigned
beaweasley2 recommended I check out this story. I'm sitting home today, sick, so I thought I'd give myself a treat. You've done a good job of making me wonder just what side Snape is on. If I didn't know better I'd think he's one of the bad guys. I absolutely agree that he needs to go in to do a man's job--a boy just won't work. I'm also curious about Draco so far. Really great start. I can't wait to read more.

sommerlee2010.04.02 - 06:36PM5: Falling Into PlaceSigned
Man, that Snape is so sly and so slick! Telling Hermione just enough about the death eaters...I kinda hope Hermione winds up bad and helping Voldemort to win. Just kinda.

sommerlee2010.04.02 - 06:18PM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I love when Ron makes it easy! Snape is overdoing it a bit with the poetry, I think, but then again, Hermione is very naive in this story.

GwenDuck2010.01.14 - 07:19PM42: Back to Good: Part 2Signed
Loved your story! Loved your ending! Your characterizations are fantastic, and I admire your ability to craft such a complex work of art. Your story has had me all over the place emotionally, and I admit I haven't done much else these past few days but read it. Perhaps now I can get back to the rest of my life!

Author's Response: LOL Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you liked it. xoxoxox

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