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| run away mental patient | 2005.04.25 - 08:41PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| oh my god i LOVED IT!!
You MUST update fasT! Author's Response: lol!! thanks! more up soon. xoxoxo ~SW69~ | |||
| droxy | 2005.04.25 - 08:40PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| I loved the magic behind the letter. Snape is such a sneaky conniving devil.
Might be more fun if HG figures out she's being manipulated and just goes along for the ride ;> Author's Response: oh that would be fun, wouldn't it? grrr... i hadn't thought of that. i have her finding out later (in my mind, and she's like shrug "come here" ) lol more up soon!cheers | |||
| Stormi | 2005.04.25 - 08:35PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Love the story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter. A little confused though. In chapter two it states that " He’d hoped that she would find her way to the pair. It had actually been the fourth time that he’d seen them together. Tonight, they seemed to be taking things a bit farther. It was pure luck that Hermione sensed the need to have another patrol. " Then in chapter three is says, "It was he that lured his destined lover down to the dungeons. He needed her to witness what was happening first hand if she was to make the break from the boy on her own without persuasion." Am I just reading it wrong? Either way keep up the great work! Author's Response: Yep, I'll have to fix that. I didn't want to give away about his parchment until this chapter. So I wanted it to sound like he was uncertain that she would come (as if he'd only just tested it). I'll go backand try to word that better without giving away about the parchment somehow. I'd forgotten. Thanks, doll. I'm glad you are liking the story :) I'll have more up soon ~Sw69~ Author's Response: Hey, I went change it around to something like this..... It doesn't really give away anything, but they'll know beforehand that he likely had something to do with it... What do ya think? That went extremely well. He’d hoped that his small plan would work, and she would find her way to the pair. It had actually been the fourth time that he’d seen them together. Tonight, they seemed to be taking things a bit farther. It was pure genius that had caused Hermione to sense the need to have another patrol. When he saw her nearing, as he'd planned, he knew that victory was at hand. | |||
| Layla | 2005.04.25 - 08:18PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Wow, I think this may be my fav Severus ever-cunning, maybe evil but loyal to our Hermione.
And I have to say you made Sev smelling and keeping "his witch's" panties so damned erotic!
I can't wait to see the seduction!
Great job! Author's Response: thanks, layla. I'm like the manipulative side as well. I hoped that i didnt squick many people out with that knickers sniffing thing, but I'm certain men do that (Lol) The knickers will be back. The seduction is long and slow.. and before long, nex chapter.. there will be a little something in each chapter leading up to it :) ~sw69~ | |||
| snapeslave | 2005.04.25 - 08:14PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| southern you are the greatest...i just love sneaky snape...gives me goosebumps...oh how i love your writing style...keep up the good work...which i know you will...question...when can we expect an update for vegence...soon i hope...lol...take care... Author's Response: it's finished now (the chapter anyway), but I don't think that my beta has time tonight. It will definitely be up tomorrow though. Cheers! Sneaky!Snape is adorable (muhahaha) thanks! | |||
| Calisto_Marx | 2005.04.25 - 08:11PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| You really are my favorite writer!! ^_^ You have Snape Seduction down pat! Hmmm....I wonder if that could be marketed? How to Seduce like the Head of Slytherin! ^_~ But, truly, you have him down to a T! This chapter was marvelous. All of the little subtle ways he's manipulating her, yet allowing her to still make up her own mind about him. I kept wondering if Snape hadn't done soemthing to push Ron into Pansy's arms? Hmmm...
But really! I love everything you write. For some reason I hadn't read this story until today, but when I saw that you wrote it I just had to read it! ^_^ I also like this cunningly sly and manipulative Snape a lot. I think he can be nice when it helps him meet his own means. I also like this Hermione. I like to think of HErmione as an innocent in some ways. Plus, I've always liked the "Little Red Riding Hood" and "The Big Bad Wolf" idea. I think Hermione is the sweet girl bringing sweets to her grandmother, and Snape is the wolf, trying to get those sweets!
Also, I aimply love Byronic heroes. I love Jane Eyre and Pride and Prejudice. Snape definately fits the discription. Can't wait for more! ^_^ Hug to you for starting a new fic!
Your ever adoring fan,
Jen
(P.S. I tell ya, if you ever DO write a handbook on how to seduce, I'd love a copy for my boyfriend. I love him dearly, but he could definately learn a thing or two from a fellow Snape lover! ^_~) Author's Response: hello dearest... I love the Slytherin Seduction going on here :) I'm glad you like my stories. I will say that this one is going to be a little long, but worth the read :) Byronic heroes are so yum...tall, dark, handsome, smooth... (swoon) xoxoox lol more up soon ~SW69~ | |||
| mamabecca | 2005.04.25 - 06:58PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| sneaky slytherin! i love everything about this story. i think ron needs a good hex or two, then again i am a vendictive witch myself!!! *giggles* you rock! Author's Response: muahahaha.. i would have done a hex to his bollocks mahself! I'm glad you like the story. sneaky!severus just appeals to me. this is great fun! Thanks! More up soon! ~SW69~ | |||
| Maggie | 2005.04.25 - 06:53PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Awesome! Author's Response: Thanks! More up soon! ~SW69~ | |||
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