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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Maddy Riddle2006.01.22 - 04:50AM34: Time Marches OnSigned
Good chapter. I like it. Thank you. The chapter seems made to fit my review, isn't it? *giggles* Hope people didn't blame you for it. ;)
I may not like the way Hermione behaves, but I can understand that being confined to that place can make her nerves to snap in that way. But please, please, please, make her a better person before I'll be forced to smack her in the head to see if I can re-arrange her ideas. I'm not in the mood to deal with Gryffindors for long periods of time. *g*
40 chapters? That means 6 more chapters... as long as Hermione behaves I can patiently wait as long as you need to write them.
BTW, did I thank you for Adrian Pucey's conversation. It was the kind of thing I was imagining she needed to hear.

Author's Response: Yes, definitely! I know that I'm always moody b/c I feel "trapped" here in my home. I fricking developed some going places phobia, yet it drives me mad. LOL. Yes, 5 chapters plus the epilogue.

I'll defend Hermione until the end though. She's only 18... not 30 like some peeps portray her. I like to play on her immaturity still because I don't think she'd just change over night b/c an older guy wants her. However, she will come to terms with things and realize that something has got to give and see her faults.

Pucey will be back once more. :)

Satoni2006.01.19 - 11:19AM34: Time Marches OnSigned
hi Sun, I've been out for a while, but i finally found the time to read up on your fic....I like how it is going and am sad to find out there are only a few chapters left...

Author's Response: welcome back. I know what you mean. I will feel bummed when it's over. :(

strega2006.01.18 - 09:04PM3: Subtle StrategySigned
Girl, you rock. Nice story, well written. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you~! more up soon!

MollysSister2006.01.17 - 04:33PM34: Time Marches OnSigned
Id love to hear all about Draco’s meeting with his parents. Maybe they have some news to share with him too? Being stuck in one room with nothing to do… Perhaps another Malfoy is on the way?? You did a good job of portraying Hermione’s depression, she has stopped railing against Severus and is to the acceptance part. Just in time to be surprised that Harry lives! I am surprised that there are only a few more chapters left. I would have thought this story would be going on a lot longer.

Author's Response: Yeah, they've been honeymooning I'd think. LOL... Showers together and the like... Accapetance is hard to go through sometimes. Thanks! I could stretch the story out, but I figured I'd stick to my original plans. :)

MollysSister2006.01.17 - 03:51PM32: Time to ChooseSigned
At long last Severus has decided what side he is on. And not without a fair bit of angst. And by default the Malfoys will live to see another day

Author's Response: Lucky Malfoys, eh? And finally! Yes! He's decided.

MollysSister2006.01.17 - 03:38PM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
Oh Ron why couldn’t he stay loyal to Pansy in the end? I was very surprised about the long conversation Hermione had with Voldy. Its not often he gets an actual conversation. The really twisted part is that his ideas are not so far out there. If he would have put a bit more polish on it, he might have convinced her. But what did Snape find whilst he was out and about?

Author's Response: Nah, he's only been with Pansy for a little while and Hermione was so much more permanent in his life. I guess when you're dying, you aren't thinking clearly. I really enjoy using Voldemort in this fic. More up soon.

Nagilina2006.01.17 - 01:20PM34: Time Marches OnSigned
wosh... what a story. I've just read the whole, and figured one review at the end would do it. I like your plot. I love the fact that we can't really count Snape as a good/bad guy. He's playing on his own team, fending for himself, wich we all ought to do. Great progress in the story, and the most recent developments are just oh, so intreaguing! One question though. Was Dumbledore at HQ all the time without anyone noticing, or had he just appeared there? Wouldn't Fawkes alerted someone so they could help Dumbledore heal (or eat for that matter)? Otherwise, looking forward to a new chapter any day now... ;)

Author's Response: I tried to make him on the fence most of the way. I'm glad you are liking things. He hadn't been there long, and Fawkes didn't want to leave his side. Snape will explain that later. Comatose people don't usually eat, so we'll say that Fawkes' healing powers worked well enough until someone (Snape) was able to come.

MollysSister2006.01.16 - 10:43PM29: We Do What We MustSigned
Oh my-I never thought you would tip the dark lord to win. Oh my

Author's Response: hehe... Evil!Southern indeed. Happy reading! ~cackles~

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