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| Titania | 2005.11.21 - 07:53PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Voldie is a sneaky, Slytherin bastard, isn't he? Excellent chapter! Live long and prosper, Titania Author's Response: **holds up fingers as a Vulcan would** Live long and prosper... | |||
| Titania | 2005.11.21 - 07:52PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Voldie is a sneaky, Slytherin bastard, isn't he? Excellent chapter! Live long and prosper, Titania Author's Response: Very sneaky! hehe | |||
| Miss Misery | 2005.11.21 - 07:14PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Wow. These last two chapters have been excellently written. The way you write dialogue is incredible. You make it sound so natural. That's where I struggle the hardest. Great job, man. Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying it. There isn't much dialogue in the next chapter, but the one after will have some. I find that sometimes the convo sounds forced, so I back away and read it over again to make adjustments. thank you! | |||
| Novinha | 2005.11.21 - 06:25PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| I really like the similarities you draw between Voldemort and Hitler - so easy to think that what he wants is somewhat reasonable. If only he had been taken to that arts school. Etc. Etc. It is gloriously easy to fall for monsters' rhetorics. Hermione seems to still see Snape through pink glssess - interrets things to his adventage. Lets him have the upper hand most of the time. I;d love more sneaky behaviour of her - but it;s your story :) And hey - Voldemort victorious! Greetings from Poland, Novinha Author's Response: Thank you! Quite easy to slip into a "that makes sense" mode." Hermione will get a larger voice in things in chapter 33, I think. For now, she's more in control than she knows. Cheers! | |||
| bellasol67 | 2005.11.21 - 06:21PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| I liked this chapter, I was so afraid that when Hermione went wandering bad things would happen, but hell, you made Voldemort darn near civil! My favorite part of this chapter was the conversation between Snape and Hermione...I just don't think that Hermione is going to completely get her way...but we'll see. To bad Hermione doesn't have her parchment...she could probably use that right about now. Thank you for the quick update and looking forward to the next one. Author's Response: Severus won't truly want to give Hermione her way b/c it would make things harder on the both of them, thanks to Voldie. Hehe! However, he does have a decision to make in the next chapter. *grin* The next one is up. I hope you enjoy! | |||
| June W | 2005.11.21 - 05:07PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Ooh, that Voldy is good.... makes me wonder what would've happened if Albus had made him DADA teacher. And who are those two "normal" Death Eaters she met, and who was screaming? Or are they just "background" characters we won't see again? I'm anxious to see what happened when Severus went to Hogwarts to kill off those other Death Eaters, and if he saw Lucius and Cissa and Draco and Ginny. Back to your keyboard, wench! (And thanks for the new chapter!) Author's Response: I wonder about that, too. I think he would have had his pick of the litter where his army is concerned! Those are just background people to make her realize that they are normal too. Severus goes to kill Lucy and the others in the next chapter. hope you like! | |||
| Stormi | 2005.11.21 - 04:54PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Wonderful! Author's Response: thanks! hope you like the next bit. | |||
| kabochon | 2005.11.21 - 04:21PM | 31: Aftermath: Part 2 | Signed |
| Sunny, this was a wonderful chapter, by far the best, I think.
That damned Voldemort offered Hermione a job! I was cracking up when I read that. I was like..."that bastard just offered her a job!" Never mind that he's all cool and charismatic! It's nice (?) to see a fic where Voldy has a personality outside of the usual insane murdering megalomaniac he's normally portrayed. 'Course, don't take that to mean that I approve of his methods. Author's Response: Dang! I responded and lost it! hehe... I was wondering if Voldie offered dental and medical benefits. teehee! I'm glad you liked this one. We'll get a bit of his pov in the next chapter. | |||
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