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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

redhanded2005.11.08 - 02:08PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
please hurry i need to know what side severus is really on. is his relationship with hermione going to last. God I hope so.

Author's Response: We shall see exactly which side Snape is on in the next chapter... mostly. He won't let go of Hermione too easily. No matter what.

The Grim2005.11.08 - 01:33AM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
oh i am excited! you know, obviously a few people have to die, but this is my idea. voldemort wins the battle, BUT harry escapes to the muggle world while dumbledore buys him time because he knows they'll lose and he will die. don't worry, i don't expect you to have that. what i'd like to see, against my better judgement, is voldemort winning and thinking he killed harry when he really didn't. having voldemort win fits the story much better and i think would be much more interesting to write...but i guess i'll just have to wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: Actually, my dear Grim, you are so close. **zips lips** You've been into my notes? hehe...

get_sirius2005.11.07 - 11:19PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
the good guys better win. we all know its better that way. Severus can lead a happy life -without having to worry about his past double-life...and well Hermione would be happier too..with harry and ron and the closer order members...

Author's Response: **whistles** The chapter is up now, but remember, it's not over till the fat lady sings! :) I hope you enjoy it.

SeverusSnape2005.11.07 - 07:37PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
Oh no! Lucky Hermione checked the map. What a neat idea to have him warn her like that! Great chapter! Can't wait till the next!

Author's Response: Very lucky. She will use the map again. More up now. I hope you enjoy it.

droxy2005.11.07 - 06:58PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
evil cliffy but I cant wait for the outcome!

Author's Response: It's up now. I do hope you enjoy. There is a bit of death in there that might appeal to you.

EXECUTR2005.11.07 - 06:24PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
Great story. I can't wait for chapter 29. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: :)

EXECUTR2005.11.07 - 06:24PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
Great story. I can't wait for chapter 29. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: thank you! i hope you like it

bellasol672005.11.07 - 05:53PM28: Prelude to a WarSigned
My favorite part of this chapter was when Dumbledore tells Harry to draw on his negative emotions to overcome Voldemort, that reminded me of Star Wars and that whole hatred leads you down the dark path. It was great. Thank goodness Hermione is locked in, because she would just get herself or someone else killed. I can't really see Hermione confiding in Dumbledore about her relationship w/ Snape, maybe someone like Pomfrey, or Molly, at least a woman, not an old man. You know, I reread the last chapter and I just noticed the super creepy line towards the end, that Snape would do whatever it was to make Hermione his witch...I don't think I read it the right way the first time, but this time...CREEPY!

Author's Response: Harry = Chosen One (snicker!) Hermione definitely didn't want to confide in him either. That was odd, but he had his own motives. I wondered if anyone noticed that line. I think you may be the only one. Remeber it after you've read the next chapter.

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