Reviews for Luring the Enchantress
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.30 - 09:01PM | 21: Full Moon Rising: Part 3 | Signed |
| I loved that the Weasley parents accepted Draco. Ginny was adorable in tricking Draco into saying they were a couple. I thought for a minute that Hermione was actually burning Severus but it was the Dark Mark:D I was kind of surprised that Voldemort killed Rabastan--but he deserved it. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.30 - 08:28PM | 20: Full Moon Rising: Part 2 | Signed |
| Geez, did I even mention last time that I was surprised that Dumbledore stunned Severus--I should've known that's not what really happened. I hope Severus and Hermione can talk things out to her satisfaction. It seems there are a lot of people right now who don't trust Severus. And, I'll bet he's actually the most honest person around. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.30 - 07:05PM | 19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1 | Signed |
| I didn't expect the ending. I was surprised that Dumbledore hexed Snape. Remus knows that Tonks was at the cave. This is getting very interesting. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.30 - 06:42PM | 18: Mistakes | Signed |
| It didn't bother me when Severus used the Killing Curse on Harry in his dream. I think the hatred is probably there and he would mean it. Poor Severus. I guess he kind of was like a fumbling school boy with Hermione. I think he was overeager and pushed things a little too fast. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.29 - 08:59PM | 17: Life at the Castle | Signed |
| Ginny is so fickle--but in this case that's good. I wonder if Draco's plan will work. I would think he's fairly recognizable. I didn't expect Harry to figure out what's going on--that was tricky of him to charm his door to appear closed:D I hope Severus isn't too angry because Hermione was just sleeping in Harry's bed. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.29 - 08:23PM | 16: Back to Hogwarts | Signed |
| I'm glad Hermione stood her ground. Her first time shouldn't be while Severus is drunk. I feel bad for them having to go back to Hogwarts. I wish Severus could actually court Hermione. Great chapter. |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.28 - 11:04PM | 15: Domesticity | Signed |
I think Remus is thinking about the kiss with Ginny too late. I think Ginny is over it at this point. She seems to have feelings for Draco. I didn't think that Dumbledore would be blind to the fact that Severus and Hermione are alone in his house. You know, she is of age so I think she should do what she wants. What she wants may not fit into Dumbledore's plans though. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Exactly right! :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! |
| fynnsmom | 2010.04.25 - 05:57PM | 14: Revelations | Signed |
| It's funny that there are ways to figure out if it's really Lucius or not--the fake one looked messy and drank white rum:D I smiled when Lucius told Severus he should go stay at the manor with Narcissa. I think Narcissa would hit on Snape. Great chapter. |
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