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Pearle2006.02.04 - 02:11AM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Can't figure out who the spy is. And Tonks and Lupin, whoa, take about circumstances. I imagine they must be feeling incredibly guilty. Why do I get the feeling that you are setting us up for some thing really bad? Severus dying? Hermione hurt/dying? I feel bad for Hermione but even worse for Severus.

Author's Response: The spy has been mentioned before. Once people know, they'll say, "Oh, okay..." LOL Lupin will continue to feel very guilty while Tonks will be more accepting of what happened. I have been playing with two different endings in my mind for weeks now. LOL...

Fervesco2006.02.04 - 01:38AM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Actually, hun, despite the deaths and Herms and Severus calling it quits, this was actually an oddly relieving chapter - kind of like what we were dreading has happened now, and it is sort of ok, so hey! I'd love to know what Mrs Granger knows - given that she is thanking Snape! I'd also love to know what Snape has written in that letter, but I really hope we don't have to see him die to get to read it! Wonderful, wonderful chapter, hun! I look forward to the next *sloppy kiss* Ferv ;)

Author's Response: LOL.. Well, yes, that's one way to look at it! Cool! Mrs Granger will be back again, and we'll find out what she was thanking him for. :) Thanks for reading. xoxoxoox Sun

June W2006.02.03 - 11:11PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
PS - you're a great writer! I did understand that Tonks/Lupin stuffed up their job. I was responding to your comment about I don’t know that they could have done anything else that would have helped though when I said they could've used an invisibility cloak to follow John Granger inside (instead of staying outside, where the temptation to shag was too great); harder for them to shag inside a dental office. Moody has at least one cloak. Ah well, looks like John Granger had to die for a plot point?

Author's Response: I think Moody was likely using his though, and like I said about the Harry bit. I think they should have used Disillusionment Charms. Muahaha... I did need this for the plot though, and I don't like Tonks much, so couldn't pass up the chance to mar her a bit more. Teehee

bellasol672006.02.03 - 10:24PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Snape hugging Hermione, it felt so sad, and heart aching, I'm worried that this cannot end well for them. Hermione going around saying she would 'be better' or that she 'wasn't worthy' was driving me nuts, I'm glad that Snape clarified his reasons with her. It doesn't make it any less sad for Hermione, but at least she knows it wasn't because she wasn't woman enough for him. That being said, if she shows up on the battle field under her current state of emotional distress she is going to either get herself or someone else killed, the last thing the Order needs is an emotional teen girl out on the field. The spy? Well, the obvious is Draco or even Pansy, but who knows...I'll wait and be surprised...hell it could be Voldemort using some kind of Jedi mind trick on Ginny for all I know! LOL! I know the battle is coming and that Snape and the Order members have bigger fish to fry, but I am hoping that we see some good interaction between Snape and the others regarding his relationship with Hermione. This chapter had a set-up feel to it and I am looking forward to the next update. I'm glad the snake is dead, I hate that thing...in fanon and canon...and that reason alone makes that moment my favorite part in this chapter! Thank you for killing Nagini. :)

Author's Response: Well, when someone leaves you, you automatically feel as if you did something wrong, whether you truly did or not, and wonder how to fix things. In this case, I think Snape's being much more polite about it than he could be. He should be saying, "Well, if you hadn't acted like a little brat and Potter groupie..." LOL

No, the spy is someone that is not at headquarters. Once revealed, you'll see why. She is definitely going to have to get her act together for the battle, but I think that she, as well as Ginny/Draco, are keys to how it plays out. The next part of this chapter will be a bunch of different little skits. There won't be much time for Hermione/Snape direct interaction. I've something else in mind.

Poor Nagini! LOL... Just kidding. Voldemort is out for blood... or will be. Cheers! Thank you for reading, and I hope you like what's up next!

Jadeous2006.02.03 - 09:45PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Oof. Right in the heart southern. Severus has his reasons for breaking things off with Hermione-- I get that. But I just don't think its his choice as to what would make her happier.

Author's Response: I agree. She'll try to change his mind though. :)

June W2006.02.03 - 09:21PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Tonks or Lupin could've used Harry's invisibility cloak to follow John Granger. Nagini isn't that hard to miss - at least twelve feet long. Is the spy a little Animagus? I hope Dumbledore or Harry explains to Hermione why she can't go. But Draco and Ginny must go... You WILL put Severus and Hermione back together again, and not in a deathbed scene??? (makes puppy eyes at SW.... okay, that doesn't work.... makes Nagini eyes at SW.... sssss...)

Author's Response: They were shagging. That's why they missed what was going on. I thought I'd explained that well enough. They were attuned to each other only, and Harry's not loaning out his cloak to anyone, as they didn't know Harry was back at that point. Only the members of the house knew. Neither Remus or Tonks was expecting Nagini. They were expecting humans. Hermione is gonna go anyway. Muahaha... you know this. Yes, a deathbed scene... **wicked grin**

wartcap2006.02.03 - 09:05PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
The spy is the troll's leg umbrella stand.

Wonderful, yummy chapter. You are so amazingly brilliant. I want to be your plushie. warty xxx

Author's Response: Thanks, my doll. How did you know about that umbrella stand? lol xoxo

Tatianna2006.02.03 - 08:55PM37: Nearing the End: Part 1Signed
Simply stunning. I feel a bit like I've hit the trifecta today with updates to three of my favorite stories. But this one really holds a special place with me. Yes, I DO feel better about how things stand with Hermione and Severus, but... (***whine***) I want them TOGETHER! That said, it has been such a pleasure to see how Hermione's feelings for Severus have evolved and matured.

Author's Response: Thanks. Oh, I know how you feel. I love when some of my faves all come up at once. They will see each other again... at Voldie's Place. Teehee... Hermione is definitely growing. :)

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