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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

GinnyW2005.05.15 - 04:39PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Another brilliant chapter! I really like this Severus. Ginny & Draco? Is that the new beau that you're planning for her? ;-) I loved DD being unsupportive in this 'relationship'...I think it would be really neat if he had a meeting w/ Hermione to also tell her to stay away from Severus and only do the 'friend-thing' to satisfy LV and any spies and that's it. Maybe Minerva involved in that conversation...trying to make Hermione feel guilty. Love it, love it...I like how it's a slow seduction...just wonderful! ~Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. This Severus is so fun. Draco is being friendly to find out some information :) but I do see them as being close. I think it's best that Albus didnt like the idea of them being close, sort of rings true to me. McGonagall will notice the pair being 'friendly' soon. Thanks so much, dearie!

Thorn2005.05.15 - 04:32PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Wonderful chapter! I haven't read a better scene where Severus and Albus discuss student/teacher relations. So in character. Albus has power but must walk a fine line to appease his spy. I always have a hard time with the fics where Albus is ready to pimp out his student, though I have no problem believing Snape would engage in an illicit affair. The plot building is excellent with lots of new threads. 10/10 Good luck with the contest fic!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the Snape/Dumbledore scene. I was a bit nervous about that, not sure if people would like an unhappy Albus. I just think he has to cater to snape slightly on this, but he's definitely not happy about it. Glad you are liking it, doll. more up soon

magicalwonder2005.05.15 - 04:24PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Southern - Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I have to say that several times during this chapter I found myself think, 'Smooth, Severus.' It is a testiment to your writing capabilities that one can get lost in your stories. It is understandable that Dumbledore feels betrayed, in a way, but he needs the information that Snape gets for him and Draco, although connected would not be able to get access to the same information, if he is even on the side of the light. Which has yet to be decided. Good chapter, and good luck on the story for the Spring Faire. B

Author's Response: Hiya! I'm glad you are liking this. Severus here is so fun to write. I think that since AD is always going on about his trust in SS that he'd be disappointed and angry to know that he was wrong. Draco is about the same as Snape (loyalty-wise fence thing), but he isn't in as thickly as SS. So, right, AD has to cater to Snape some to keep him in the know. thanks! more up soo

Satoni2005.05.15 - 04:19PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Ok, I grant u the permission to start (or finish) another fic (then i will have another fine story to read, hehe) but only if you promise to continue this story before you continue vengeance. Now, I can't really let you promise that now can I, that would be taking away your human rights on freedom. But I really like this chapter and can't wait for you to update. It wasn't too long btw, it waas exactly the right lenght, even a bit too short I dare say.... ;) Cheers! hope you win the spring faire!

Author's Response: LOL Thanks! I'm going to be doing Vengeance next, of course, but it shouldn't take too long, as that isn't going to be an overly large chapter. Thanks so much. More of something up soon.

cocoachristy2005.05.15 - 04:11PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
I absolutely LOVE that Severus acted like the injured party when Albus was berating him. He so so good. And I LOVE how he turns everything around to make Hermione thing she is the instagator. I love this Severus, Sun. You are doing an incredible job, as usual, and I can't wait for more, Ginny and Draco, eh? Does our favorite blonde Slytherin have orders too?? ;-) And who does Harry like that does not go to Hogwarts? Lovely chapter, can't wait for more! smooches! ;-)

Author's Response: Sev is very sneaky. Hermione is easily manipulated, but we'll see her changed a bit as she gets comfortable with him.Thanks, doll. Glad you like it. Gin/Draco will have more up soon. Yes, Draco is on assignment. hehe Harry loves.....

Alexa Potion2005.05.15 - 04:07PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Hehehehe, this was sooooo brilliant chapter that I have to bow for your honour!!! "Had I known that I could do that myself, I would have done so before now. Brilliant," I laught for that sentence so hard that I got the tearts in my eyes. Hehehehe, brilliant indeed!! Severus is sooo sneaky about seducing Hermione and Hermione is so a naive that I forgot that she's a cleverest witch the ages who had attended in Hogwarts! Come on, Hermione! You can be so thick sometimes that I wonder do you have exchanged the brains with Ron by spell accident?!!! Well, it was Dumbledore who followed Hermione down the dungeons. It was clever idea that he's some extraordinary skills that the others doesn't have! What's Parkinson's dad plotting? Has he business with Malfoy or Voldemort about Pansy seducing Ron? Is this all about Ron's parents working for the Order? Well, if it is I wonder why Ron isn't vigilence about Slytherin seducing him? And why the other Gryffindors aren't warning Ron for Pansy? I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter, again! Hehehe. I wish your a good luck for the Spring Faire!! I have myself some ideas for the story but I wonder does I have a time to put it all on the paper?! Aargh!!! Hehehe

Author's Response: teehee~ Thanks, Alexa. I loved that line ahhahaa... Hermione is simply nervous because he's an older man, and she is uncertain if he truly cares for her. It won't be long before she is as vocal with him as she was with Ron. She just needs to get comfy first. I think Dumbledore probably knows things the rest of them don't know. hehe

Parkinson has his own reasons for wanting his daughter to date a Weasley. Well, I'll have that in the next chapter. About Ron, I believe he's thinking with the wrong head as of late. Most students don't know about him and Pansy. They are keeping it on the down low. Ginny gave him an earful though, and Harry did as well. I've just not shown those conversations. I should have more up soon.

mugglegirl09082005.05.15 - 03:58PM6: The Plot ThickensSigned
Lovely chapter, Southern. Severus' plan is moving along smoothly. Poor Hermione still doesn't seem to be getting it. But, I can understand that since he is putting on a very good show. I hope she isn't as naive as we think, though, like you said in your note.

Can't wait for more! I'll keep an eye out for your entry to the Faire. Good luck with that! Cheers! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, doll. Snape is doing things so easily, huh? He'll have a bit of a wrench soon. Hermione is thinking a little more clearly now. Like see how she manipulated him in return by pretending to think she'd done something wrong to get him to talk? hehe.. we'll see more of that. more up soon. thanks

Nyx2005.05.10 - 11:37AM5: Falling Into PlaceSigned
OH swoon! This is a Snape I can get behind. Sneaky and cunning ... but he seems to have a soul! Good Chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, dollie! Glad you are enjoying. hehe (sneaky!Snape is fun)

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