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| queenp | 2005.04.25 - 06:49PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Severus, thoughts of being visited by a succubus...*giggle* OK, now for the real stuff. Chapter was well done. I think her feelings can still be mamipulated quite handily...She may feel like she loves Ron, but he did betray her...It is not easy to forgive that kind of betrayal. The story is going to be a good one and I look forward to the next update. Make one soon, please... Author's Response: ahahaha.. see my shameless succubus plug eh? too funny. glad you liked it. she's not going to let ron slide back in, though he will try. glad you are enjoying it! Thanks! More up soon! ~SW69~ | |||
| Melly | 2005.04.25 - 06:23PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Oh I love it!! The talk with Ron was realistic (although I think that after actually seeing him in action with Pansy, HG probably wouldn't trust him anymore). I think Ron and Hermione are really just good friends and confused that feeling with something more.
Can I say I absolutely love this Severus. This is the way I picture him. Maybe a bit bad, sneaky, manipultive, but really wanting only Hermione. And I love the way you do have him picture having HG for the long-term. And the way he's thinking that even if Voldemort wins, he'll protect her is so romantic. I love a SS after HG and her being the one to pull back for a change (since the Ron thing is still there). This Severus is great!
Absolute brillant story! Loving it.
Randelle Author's Response: hiya! Thanks so much. I'm thinking it's over between R/hg. He'll try to talk her into getting back with him, but i don't think she'll fall for it, not with Darth Sidious, sorry, Severus whispering things to her. hehe He does want Hermione around for the long hall. I think he's a bit surprised by that himself :) I'm really glad that you are liking the story! Thanks! More up soon! ~SW69~ | |||
| Drake | 2005.04.25 - 06:09PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Pah to Ron. I still want you to finish Vengeance, but this is good too. *impatient* Author's Response: hehe... adios ron. he'll be missing her soon though, but i'm thinking it'll be a bit late for him. Vengeance should be up as soon as my beta is done with it. | |||
| June W | 2005.04.25 - 06:05PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Ugh, she was too easy on Ron! a wise man inspected many cauldrons before settling on the first one he saw - hah! like Arthur Weasley would be happy to let a lot of boys "inspect" Ginny. There's a big difference between inspecting a cauldron and using it, especially as Hermione clearly didn't want to be "inspected" in such fashion. It's too easy for a girl to think a failed relationship is all her fault; please don't let Hermione fall into that trap! Author's Response: Too right. I'll bet Arthur gave Ginny some advice about not inspecting any stirrers hahahaha. Nah, Hermione won't fall into any traps. I promise. Well, that's not entirely true. She will fall into the Severus trap. Thanks! More up soon! ~SW69~ | |||
| ArtemisGoddess | 2005.04.25 - 05:48PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| This is so awesome! I love it! I can't wait until you update next! Please, make it soon! I love this!!!!!!! Author's Response: thanks, doll. i just love the feedback, so it does make me want to write even more quickly. hehe i'm starting on the next set now xoxo | |||
| Althea Grey | 2005.04.25 - 05:43PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| This is a really great story, but then again, all of yours are. I think you portrayed teh scene between HG/RW very accurately, although, I would have expected Hermoine to be a bit more angry, I think, but it was a very mature reaction, which is also part of Hermoine's character, so it still works. I can't wait to read more, especially as your Snape is very interesting and deceptive! Author's Response: I pleased that you are liking it so far! :) Hermione was a bit angry, but she had time to calm down once the numbness left. She's trying to be mature though, and there will be a little more between them (nothing sexual or anything, just that he wants her back). Snape is just lovely in this story. I've some fun things planned.**wink** ~SW69~ | |||
| mugglegirl0908 | 2005.04.25 - 05:40PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| Why that sneaky Slytherin bastard! He is just so bad! But oh how I love him that way...*winks* Hehe...another great chapter Southern! This story is just gettin better and better. I have to say, though, that I'm starting to not want them to end up together. I mean, the thing with the rose and enchanted parchment...he is really manipulating her. If she finds out I don't know if she will be ok with it like he seems to think. I hope she does find out and then she lets him have it! He would have to apologize, of course, and decide for sure which side he is on. Then, maybe they could be together. *grins* Hurry with the next update, please. I look forward to it! :-) Author's Response: teehee.. i love him this way, and sorry, doll, but they will end up together. I'm thinking that by the time she finds out, she'll be so wound up that it won't matter much how they got together, just that they are. as far as what side he is on, i'm not sure. :) | |||
| Meredith | 2005.04.25 - 05:39PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| You are ingenious. Author's Response: thanks, doll :) | |||
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