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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Horserider2005.04.22 - 05:19AM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
Very different take, but I am raptly watching to see what will happen next. You have a really good Slytherin!Snape going on here. Not being a huge fan of Ron except for comic relief, as far as I am concerned you can have at him. ;) ~HR

Author's Response: thanks, doll. glad to see you about. I rarely see you via email. All going ok for you? hehe bout Ron, poor bloke (always comic relief). Gonna keep mah sneaky Snape throughout. I have some good plans for it so far :)

zambonigirl2005.04.22 - 01:12AM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
Oh-and you're going to make EVERYONE fall in love with Sly!Severus, not just Hermione. Like we aren't in love with him already. But you're making him so deliciously DEVIOUS, you naughty minx! Lots of hugs an kisses. Good job!

Author's Response: **giggle** Thanks! I have great stuff planned for him, muahahahaha cheers! xoxo

zambonigirl2005.04.22 - 01:11AM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
I'm a pretty hard Ron fan. He and Pigwidgeon are my two favorite characters, so I always dislike it when authors portray him negatively. I also think he's pretty awkward around girls-he couldn't ask Hermione to the ball, etc.-but when it comes to characterizations, an author needs to make a decision. I think you're doing a good job of portraying Ron as loving Hermione and caring about her, but being careless in searching out female companionship. Plus, she's mentioned that he's rough, in his mind, he could be thinking that he needs a bit of practise, and let's face it, Pansy Parkinson is Hogwart's biggest slut since Bellatrix Black! (Okay, fanon geek coming out.) I'm interested to hear what they have to say, and I'm sure that Hermione won't be too hasty in forgiving him.

Oi, Ron! Couldja stop being a berk for just five minutes? There's a dear.

Author's Response: hahahaha!!! i love ron in canon (except when he was pissy to harry in gof) and the movies, but for some reason, I don't like him with hermione. I hate prat!Ron, so I'm going to give him a good bit of reasoning behind his deeds. He'll be on good terms with her still after the next chapter (either way). Pansy is quite a tart (oh, draco! what's happened?) of course, I could be poisoned by fanon lol more up soon!

droxy2005.04.21 - 10:27PM1: PrologueSigned
Who says being out for yourself is evil? Like you said, Ron is already loosing her. SS is just going to go after what he wants, and he wanted it before meeting with LV. LV just gave him permission. Love the meeting with LV. I just love Death Eater planning meetings, they can be really fun. Have fun with duplicious!Snape

Author's Response: right on! I'm gonna have some great fun with this. i've some plans that I think are just... yum. lol

droxy2005.04.21 - 10:10PM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
it's fan fiction, do what you want with Ron. Since youare so fond of lemon, you could have given HG a REAL eye opener! (evil grin). Yes, Snape is calculating. I was wondering when she's miss her panties. What fun it would be if she FINDS them again. While it's great fun watching HG get manipulated, hopefully her mind kicks in and makes Snapes job a little more tricky. I expect Snape to play is cards patiently, but he runs the risk of his baser male instincts getting the better of him... So sad about Hagrid, but he would have taken a few DEs with him.

Author's Response: Thanks! Too right about the eye opener. dang.. .had I only thought of it hehe the knickers will be found one day (smirk) that's going to be fun. yep. I imagine Hagrid hard to take down. Grawp as well. Poor blokes.

alexajones222005.04.21 - 10:01PM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
Aww poor Hermione. Now I feel bad for her, getting suckered by two men at once.

Author's Response: well, i don't feel bad for her, not really. muahahaha... (wicked!Southern) lol ron's not too cool, but Snape will eventually love her (and won't be looking for any other women)

SeverusSnape2005.04.21 - 09:56PM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
I am extremely offended and demand an elaborate apology. Haha, just kidding. I love this! Update soon!

Author's Response: hahahah!!! my eyes widened! i was like wow!! too cute. more up soon!! cheers

Mystic2005.04.21 - 09:31PM2: Taking Advantage of the SituationSigned
This is exactly how I see Severus. I think he is waiting to see which side will come out the winner and go with that side. If the Dark Side wins (sounds a bit like Star Wars..sorry, getting back to the subject), I think that Severus would find a way to keep Hermione from getting hurt, claiming her as a slave, wife, lover...you get the picture, right? If the Light wins he'll find a way to be with her. I have a feeling that Ron is going to get his in the end no matter what...revenge by Severus perhaps? Or Molly ;p heheh..update soon!

Author's Response: hiya mystic. I'm thinking so as well (survival of the most fit and all that). lol I love Star Wars and am referred to as Darth Southern at times hahahaha... Severus will do what he has to do to protect his own (his own being himself and his hermione) cheers! more up soon!!

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