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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

wartcap2006.03.02 - 11:10AM1: PrologueSigned
But...she undid his smock, saw his erection and ran straight to the Floo to call everyone over. Um, mate, where's the bit where she covered him up again? Poor Sev! He's all exposed. Prolly got a bit chilly. Smeg, you know? warty xxxxxxxxx

Author's Response: lol... As if she would do that. Besides, they weren't all in his room looking at him. Perhaps the bloke needs a bit of air round his privates. Teehee! Oi, wonder if he's got any of that... stuff. Ahahha... yes! lmao

LauraK2006.03.02 - 09:22AM40: ConsequencesSigned
Bravo! Man, this has been one great ride and I can't wait for the conclusion. I was devastated when I thought Severus was dead...so glad you did it like this. Wonderfully written, excellent story! Thanks- Laura

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and following along. More up now. Hope you enjoy. Cheers!

Amethystique2006.03.02 - 08:53AM40: ConsequencesSigned
The plot thickens! Great as per usual and I wait with anticipation for the next gripping installment of ....Dum Dum DAAA....Luring the Enchantress! Sorry *giggles evilly* it just reminds me of the old mystery theatre programmes with the serious narrator and black & white credits. Brilliant! LOL ;-) X

Author's Response: I swear that I saw and answered this review already. LOL. I've got Hitcock on the brain now--his old timey creepy thrillers. Hehe.

caspar1272006.03.02 - 06:38AM40: ConsequencesSigned
yey! great chapter! voldemort is really sick though! a sex doll???!!! what the... anyhoo, i still liked this chapter alot! update soon again!

Author's Response: Voldemort is very sick, the bastard! LOL. More up soon! Glad you liked it.

Amethystique2006.03.02 - 04:58AM40: ConsequencesSigned
The plot thickens! Great as per usual and I wait with anticipation for the next gripping installment of ....Dum Dum DAAA....Luring the Enchantress! Sorry *giggles evilly* it just reminds me of the old mystery theatre programmes with the serious narrator and black & white credits. Brilliant! LOL ;-) X

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy that you enjoy it! Hahaha! Now you've got me thinking of the "oldies." LOL!!

Velvet2006.03.02 - 04:55AM40: ConsequencesSigned
yah! more soon plzthnx!

Author's Response: I have more up! Hope you enjoy. Thanks!

Night Owl2006.03.02 - 02:27AM40: ConsequencesSigned
Dang it southern why do you have to stop? The chapter *and* the story. I want more! Make the last chappie a good long one or I guess you'll just have to write a sequel. *hint hint* Sorry about being so demanding but I've had a crappy day. Anyways, great job, post soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I do have the next bit up, the first of two. Glad you are enjoying this. I wish I could stretch it out, but alas...

Maddy Riddle2006.03.02 - 12:33AM40: ConsequencesSigned
You do like to torment your readers, don't you? lol
Great chapter. I like Hermione now. I would have hated if she managed to find a cure immediately or by herself. This way is a lot more believable.
I have the feeling the list Hermione did of why she dislikes Lucius is actually the list of why you dislike the man... but as it's true, I can't complain. ;)
Hermione have changed a lot. I hope Severus likes what he finds when he wakes up. She wasn't tempted to... how do I phrase it tastefully? Never mind, I can't, and I refuse to imply she would take advantage of him...
I have thought Tonks would've trip or something, but taking Felix Felicis by mistake? She's a menace!
More, please? Soon?

Author's Response: Indeed. I don't like Super!Hermione with all the answers too much, so I figured I'd let her have to research some. About Lucius, I do like him in fanon, and always try to find a way to redeem him somehow. Those things were my thoughts on what he's done bad, plus a bit of Pook's. (She pointed out that only a monster would try to hurt an eleven-year-old girl.)

She wouldn't take advantage of him, and interestingly enough, I have a small section in the next chapter where she gives her thoughts on that. But it did cross her mind, I'm sure, to see how it would feel with his hand against her breast. I think I had her think that for a moment. I guess we would all wonder though (or my twisted arse would... hehe!). Tonks. Blah. We'll hear about them again, but that's about it.

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