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| zambonigirl | 2005.05.02 - 11:38AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Wow, I want more. More, more, more. With a rebel yell, I'm crying "More, more more!" Okay, just give me more. Please? Author's Response: hehehe... definitely more up soon!! Be back in a bit. I think I heard Billy Idol singing! | |||
| Winna | 2005.05.02 - 11:13AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| I like your stories and I think you are a very talented writer. You have a gift for showing the dark side of characters without turning them into something campy. I’m still intrigued by the plot and I’m curious to see where Dark!Severus will go in his manipulation of Hermione. That said, the opening scene in this chapter was a tad too graphic for my tastes. Oh, I understand the reason for it; the reader is now on edge and realizing that this is NOT Hearts&Flowers!Severus. I just thought it was a little too squicky, although a quick look at other reviews shows I’m in the minority here. Guess I’m just a Prude!Reader… Author's Response: lol. no worries there. I wanted to portray that he could be dark, but mostly I wanted to prove that he'd never do that to her, which is a good thing. hehe... I have some goodies planned and i'll be posting again soon. cheers, doll | |||
| magicalwonder | 2005.05.02 - 09:30AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Very naughty beginning. I loved it. And you are absolutely correct about Hermione and Ron, she does have very good reason for wanting to wait. I also think that it would be interesting if she were to mention their conversation to Severus and see him worry over the fact that Ron was trying to manipulate her into making a decission before she was ready. I think it would be too funy to have the master manipulator explain the manipulation of another. I really love the way this story is coming together. Like any real Slytherin in his position, he has set himself up to come out with his woman no matter which side is victorious. Really wonderful...... And as for Ginny. I think that having Ginny like Remus give Hermione perspective on possibly what she is feeling for Snape. No, I don't think Snape killed Terrance. Not that he couldn't have but that it is more likely that the Dark Lord did it to show is new followers what happens when you step out of line. Also with the use of the dark mark it would draw way too much attention to Snape if the Dark Lord did not intend for Terrance to be killed and that is not the way for Severus to stay in everyone's good graces. Wonderful job. I anxiously await more.
B Author's Response: muahahaha about the beginning. teehee.. That's a good idea about Telling Severus about Ron. I have something like that planned in the next bit, but it's not with Ron. hehe.. you'll enjoy it! Ron will know though that it's time to move it along. Severus is being right sneaky and I truly love it. Ginny's feelings for Remus will let Hermione know that feeling something for an older man isnt bad. I don't know that ginny will get her wish though. Higgs' murder will be explained :) I'm really glad that you are enjoying this story! I'll have more up soon. Cheers | |||
| pickles | 2005.05.02 - 07:30AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| It would be very interesting if he did. he could say it was retribution for befowing the name of his beloved... thank you for a new chapter. the first part had me going. thankfully it was a dream. sorry i haven't been checking in lately. 2nd tower went down. bill was able to fix it ( we think )... have a good week sweetie. i'll try to check back with you later. Patty Author's Response: thanks, doll. I'll have more up about Higgs' death in the next chapter. About the dream, at least we've established that he would never harm her that way :) woohoo | |||
| hawkgirl | 2005.05.01 - 11:23PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| wonderful chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one. Author's Response: thanks! more up in a couple of days. I really like it so far. not much left to add in. cheers! SW69 | |||
| Stormi | 2005.05.01 - 08:47PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Anonymous |
| Another fantastic chapter. Ron is a real bugger. I take it that Severus is going to be on what ever side wins. Will Hermoine be comfortable with that? Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! Author's Response: I'm thinking that he is on the winning side. lol.. sneaky man, that. glad you liked the chapter. Ron will give up soon and have other interests. Hermione will fall for her potions master deeply, but I believe it will be mutual. Maybe that will ensure the right side wins! more up soon. cheers!! | |||
| Mystic | 2005.05.01 - 06:19PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Anonymous |
| Yay, another chappie! My computer finally got fixed so I can catch up on all the stories I read, so...Interesting chapter intro, I got freaked out until it was stated that it was just a dream. The urge to hit Ron is just stronger now, trying to say Hermione is at fault while she did nothing wrong, for shame! I hope Molly will strighten him out, the git. As for Severus, ever the Slytherin as always. He's just bidding his time to see which side will come out the winner. Can't wait to see what's up next! Author's Response: glad your pc is fixed. I'd have withdrawals i think. I was a bit naughty to trick everyone that way, wasn't I? But, at least we've established that he'd never do anything like that to her. :) Ron is being a prat. His heart is in the right spot, mostly anyway, but I'm thinking he's not too smooth with words. I think he's on the fence as well. hehe More up soon. cheers | |||
| Bomba | 2005.05.01 - 01:13PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Another great chapter! "Something I Could Never Have" is one of my favorite NIN songs. Author's Response: Oh, excellent! I was wondering if any others had heard it before! I've only just discovered it recently!! So haunting! Glad you liked this chapter. More up soon. | |||
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