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macabre312005.11.22 - 03:48AM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
Damn, that was really smooth. He almost had me convinced. A little scary, that. What's sad, is that I agree with him on a few of his thoughts and ideas. What does that say about me, I wonder. Maybe it's because I'm a Slytherin, who knows. Great chapter, and I can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Very smooth! I agree with some of what he says, too, but yeah, at least we wouldn't off people, eh? Or would we? hahaha! The next one is with my beta. :)

Shadoe Austere2005.11.22 - 02:23AM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
I KNOW I'm sold. lol Very good usage of Voldmort's trait. (smooth talking) :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I nearly wanted Voldemort to win her over, and then I thought, "No, don't do it!" hahaha!

The Grim2005.11.22 - 01:29AM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
alright, now we're getting somewhere! i'm glad they resolved something to help them understand each other better. interestingly enough, that was the smallest lemon scene you've written in this whole fic. *grins* that's okay...it really wasn't the highlight of the chapter anyway. i'm glad you were able to update so promptly! can't wait for the next one. -The Grim

Author's Response: LOL! I thought of that, too. I said, "Dang, not much of a sex scene," but yes, I was focused on their convo mostly. Thank you! Sorry this took so long, but the next chapter is up.

hallowsnape2005.11.22 - 01:15AM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
the conversation between voldy-butt and hermione, was very diplomatically thought out. It was convincing in a practical manner, had the words not come from he who should be burnt alive at the stake, it could have been arguable to most muggle-misunderstanding wizards...at least he would allow the muggle borns a chance at life at all...Great selling point. However there was enough unsaid, that the sinister Death Eater Propaganda is still prominant amungst the fluff, of silver slytherin paraphrasing. Fabuluos chapter, update again soon.

Author's Response: Right, his true "self" ended up shining through. It would be easy for some to overlook some of his shortcomings. LOL... Thank you! I have the next chapter with my beta.

Adara2005.11.21 - 11:55PM24: Holiday: Part 2Signed
How dissappointing- I only read two chapters today. They were great chapters but still only two. I wish I had more time to read this. I fear I'll never catch up :(

Author's Response: LOL! I know you've caught up now. :)

Crescentmoon2005.11.21 - 11:44PM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
Heck, he nearly had me sold too! ;) I'm interested in seeing where this goes from here. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you! More up! I hope you like it!

Maddy Riddle2005.11.21 - 11:33PM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
For once I'm not going to hide myself in LJland. Yep, that Voldemort is quite convincing. And I have the feeling that a lot of people would vote for him if he was to present himself for an election. Not sure he'll have my vote, but his ideas are appealing to Ravenclaws as much as Slytherins. The threat of Hermione's parents being hurt brought back the image of the dictator... and not the kind type of dictators. Pity. I was buying that life for myself until then... Severus, books, a whole library for me to run... sounded like a good life to me (if Hermione doesn't like it, I take it and I'll be very thankful for it *winks*).

“As do I,” came the silky reply.
He meant "this" or "you"? Either way I think I may squee.
I assume people want to know what happened with the others, so go ahead, and update soon. :P

Author's Response: He's very appealing, and many would likely vote for him if he presented himself that way (aside from being afraid of him. haha). It's those threats that made her keep to "the cause" so to speak. He meant it as both. Squee! LOL.. Next chapter he voices things... You'll see. xoxox

cocoachristy2005.11.21 - 10:58PM31: Aftermath: Part 2Signed
Great chapter. Even in her confused state, Hermione remains loyal. I am so happy she is. I know she loves Severus, so I am glad she is able to keep that part of herself that has the morals she so believes in. It seems Severus is still on the fence, but getting ready to jump in Voldemort's back yard. I just hope a huge gust of wind comes and knocks him in Dumbledore's! Loved it! xoxoxoxox

Author's Response: yep, she's still loyal and will remain so. Just when you think he's on the wrong side... haha

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