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Stormi2005.08.31 - 06:15PM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
What a place to leave us. I'm pouting now, just wanted you to know. Keep up the great work!

Stormi

Author's Response: giggle. sorry about that! i did plan on updating asap but things have happened. i have written four chapters though. they are all with mah beta! woohoo

Stormi2005.08.31 - 05:51PM18: MistakesSigned
Oh wow! Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: thanks!

hermysevylove2005.08.31 - 10:27AM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
another great chapter! I hope to be reading the next soon. I am slightly confused as to why Lucius and Severus hexed Lupin though, it seems as though Severus may be showing where his true loyalties lie...

Author's Response: Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked it. The new one is finally up. Sorry it took so long. Lucius hexed Lupin so that he wouldn't attack Snape. To Lucius, he is the enemy. All will be explained in the next chapter. :)

Novinha2005.08.30 - 10:08AM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
If you hadn't come to Hogsmeade with me, I could have talked to her alone and explained things. She wouldn't have been mixed up in that.

This was great, Southern. I really, really enjoyed the Tonks bit. The tangled web of Tonks/Remus/Ginny/Draco relationship is very realistic... and makes me want to kick Remus. I'd prefer for Ginny to stay with Draco. I guess it could be Remus who dies... but then, would Hermione be devastated? Hmm, I'd like Remus to be the one. I don't much like your Remus.

I was surprised by the 'lost virginity' scene. I didn't expect you to do something like that, it was so... well, both anti-climactic and tension-building. I'm not sure how to say it, but it's intended as a compliment. So Snape indeed took her virginity but they haven't slept together yet... Mmm, you are playing your cards really well, Southern. As I've mentioned, sexual tension is your forte and by prelonging the wait (while giving us really, really erotic scenes without the actual deed) you make the anticipation grow, and keep the readers even more interested in your story, every word of it. If they consummated their relationship early on, it would be sex, sex and sex. This way we have great anticipation, and I've often found it much more satisfying in stories.

I still would rather have Voldemort win the war (maybe you could write a story like that once you're through with it? An alternate end? Anything? I need more SS/HG in Victorious Voldemort World stories. I adored BloodcultofFreud's Long Black Coat and pigwidgeon37's Danse Macabre :) but it seems to me it's fat chance. You're not evil enough, Southern ;)

I'm also grateful for the way you put emphasis on the fact that introducing sex into a relationship too early, before both the participants are ready, can easily destroy the said relationship. That many shaggin-then-plot stories are getting boring ;)

Greetings from Poland, and I do hope with this lengthy review I make up for lack of the short, regular ones.
Novinha

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm thinking Remus hasn't been very honest with his feelings, maybe not even to himself. We do get to hear his thoughts in chapter 22 though. Maybe we'll still want to swat at him. hehe

I'm glad that you are still enjoying the story. I wanted them to have to wait some time before doing the real deed. They are getting closer and closer though. hehe I hadn't seen a loss of virginity scene like that before, so thought I might write one. It was odd to me at first, but I figured was okay.

Perhaps Voldie might be victorious for a while, eh? *wink* thanks for the review! cheers, doll! SW69

EXECUTR2005.08.29 - 09:41PM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
Looking good. Please keep it coming.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have a few chapters written. They are with my beta! I was delayed thanks to the ruddy storm!

pickles2005.08.29 - 08:17PM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
It was a setup to get both malfoys and ginny. I hope you get home safely tootsie. you and yours are in my prayers. patty

Author's Response: bright one, aren't you? hehe cheers, my dear!

lora2sweet2005.08.29 - 11:04AM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
I think Lupin will break things off with Tonks. They will find Draco and Ginny and put them in a safe house. And I hope Snape and Hermione get more time together.

Author's Response: very very close! more up tomorrow

BlackCherry2005.08.28 - 06:38AM19: Full Moon Rising: Part 1Signed
Dumbledore is so kewl. The last part with him was perfect. *Old fool, ha* They don't know him well. Great Story. I love it more and more.

Author's Response: lol thanks so much, doll! glad you are enjoying

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