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Reviews for Luring the Enchantress

Maddy Riddle2005.04.30 - 06:52AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
My dear, are you trying to make me hate Tonks even more than I already do? Hope Ginny gets her wizard. ;)
What? That I should be reviewing the whole chapter? Sorry. I like it. I love this 'friendly' Severus. His act is perfect although I wonder how will he react if Hermione acts differently than he predicted (or if the situation wasn't quite as predicted and he has to improvise).
Hope Ron will be properly chastised by Molly. Or hexed by Severus or Ginny.

Author's Response: Hello, dearest. Tonks annoys me as well. lol (go figure). The way he acts is so fun, isn't it? I'm thinking he wouldn't be pleased if hermione 'rebelled' against him. I wonder if we shall see some of that? **wink** He's very good at improvisation. Molly will have a howler at some point. More up soon!! Cheers

ancientgirl2005.04.30 - 06:42AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I love that NIN song. It's such a haunting song and works well with this. Although I'd like to think he will eventually have her. I think Ron is being a putz, for lack of a better word. And I'm wondering where this is all going as far as Severus' loyalties. Tell me now if this is going to be angsty because I don't like angsty stories. I just want to save myself all the emotional turmoil. I do get the feeling however that Sev offed Higgs, no doubt for his remarks. Great chapter.

Author's Response: NIN is soo lovely. Haunting is the only word to describe that one. There will be no angst between Severus and Hermione. I'm not doing that here. This is mostly about eventual seduction with a few subplots running around. (Who's your sex Lord?) hahahaha!! More up soon.

Stratyllis2005.04.30 - 06:08AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I really want Hermioine to just dump Ron already. I loved this chapter. I love all of your chapters.

Author's Response: lol! Thanks so much. Ron's outta there as of the next chapter. Glad you've enjoyed. More up soon.

June W2005.04.30 - 04:39AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I don't think Severus killed Higgs because Voldemort would want that decision for himself, and Severus shouldn't let Lucius see that Hermione means so much to him, especially since Hermione isn't yet "his" completely. Also, Voldie would probably want to "train" his new followers by having them learn to murder. But Snape wouldn't have defended Higgs to Voldie. And I hope Hermione throws out Ron for good - that brat is totally selfish. As for Severus being on Voldie's side, I think Severus will realize (hopefully soon) that Voldie can withdraw "rewards" like Hermione... no?

Author's Response: Good thinking, June. It's an athoritive issue for Voldie. I'll explain better in the next bit. Ron is gone as far as Hermione is concerned. I seal that up in the next chapter. Severus will do what he has to do to take care of what he considers his. In his mind, he's got a few weeks investment in this, so it's for the long haul now. more up soon. Cheers!

Aicila2005.04.30 - 04:30AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
Great chapter. I really like your Snape. Waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks! more up soon. xoxo

GinnyW2005.04.30 - 02:53AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
LOL! You are right, the beginning was evil. Then again, so was the ending!!! I'm not happy w/ Ginny. She had no right to tell Ron about the letter and the flower. Maybe it was just to throw something in his face, but she still had no right. Grrrrrrrr! Hmmmm, is tea going to become habit for them? Maybe he'll actually kiss her sometime soon? Hmmmm? Thanks for writing such a wonderful piece! ~Ginny

Author's Response: Ginny was trying to taunt her brother b/c she thinks he's a brat for what he did to Mione. Hermione still isn't pleased with it and won't be entrusting any secrets to her, for now. A kiss could most definitely be in the works :)

mugglegirl09082005.04.30 - 02:34AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
Bloody hell, Southern! You had me really scared there in the beginning. I was about to jump through my computer and pound the bastard's lights out! Hehe...

I can't believe your working some Ginny/Lupin into the story too! Just wonderful! I absolutely adore Ginny/Lupin! It's so unexpected and much more interesting than Ginny/Harry. Can't wait for more on that. Will there be some Tonks/Harry action, too? That could be interesting...

I'm glad Hermione isn't just taking Ron back. The miserable cheating sod. How dare he get upset with her and try to make her feel guilty! I think I may send him a parchment cursed with dragon pox. The kind that never go away...bastard.

I think Snape did kill Higgs. After all, he did say mean things about "his witch." Interesting how jealous he is already and isn't even thinking about how much he is already feeling for Hermione. I think his feelings for her go deeper than he realizes. He is already protective of her- wanting to make sure she will be safe no matter who wins the war- and now is showing some signs of jealousy. Actually, though it was more possessiveness/protectiveness with the case of Higgs. I still think he's jealous, though and feels more for Hermione that he admits. But that's just my optimistic/romantic self wanting him to really be a good guy. *grins*

Anway, great chapter. All hail the queen of Manipulative!Snape, the wonderful Southern_Witch_69! Muahahahahahaha...*grins and winks*

Author's Response: There will be a big Remus/Tonks/Ginny/Harry blow up, but Harry has his own love in mind. Tonks and Remus, unfortunately for Ginny, will come to terms eventually. I'm thinking that if Ginny was older, Remus would be interested. There is another that will be catching her eye. hehe (not Harry).

We'll find out in the next chapter who killed Higgs. :) Well, Snape's thinking of her as his witch, so yeah, possessiveness is setting in and big time jealousy towards anyone he thinks is in the market for her affections. :) more up soon. glad you liked it. cheers

Paige2005.04.30 - 01:20AM4: Getting ComfortableSigned
I can't say I've heard "Something I Could Never Have" since I despise hard rock and am a true Country girl, but I love the story anyways. ;) Anyhow, I was reading through other challenges at WIKTT, and realized that this one fits the "Us Against the World" challenge basis too. Personally, I think that's a sign that it is an exeptionally well-done challenge that has all the elements of a good story involving the snarky Professor, and that it will reach a very wide base of people. Somehow I don't think Ron is going to escape unscathed. He's being way too possesive of Hermione for Severus to tolerate, and he's treating her like shit. As if it's ok for him to sneak around and cheat, but she can't even have an admirer when they've broken up. The thing is, I can totally see Ron doing something like this in canon, since he seems to have a dog-in-the-manger thing going for Mione currently. And as for did Snape do it? I think it's more likely that he enjoyed watching Voldemort do so. And he probably felt that the message that Hermione was protected would be taken more seriously from the Dark Lord than from Severus. After all, a zealous young recruit might think they can get on the Dark Lord's "good" side if they get rid of the Mudblood distraction of a seemingly loyal Death Eater. Shouldn't a *loyal* Death Eater be completely devoted to Voldemort? Wow, long review. Had a lot to say, lol, but I hope it was encouraging and that you enjoyed it. If you want me to shorten my reviews, I could try. :) 10/10

Author's Response: This one is a slow, haunting song. I did see that challenge. Is that the one with the Order not happy with them, but Voldemort is? I thought about doing that challenge a while back, but I changed my mind. I don't feel like messing with all the drama of the love it/hate it relationship. I want nobody to know about their fun except the bad guys, until Snape feels he has to tell Dumbledore.

Ron will need to tread carefully, but I do have things planned for him. So, he will veer off on his own course soon. Isn't it so typical to want someone yet not want them, but want them more when someone else wants them? lol.. K, that made no sense, but you know what I mean. I'm thinking that regardless of who did it, the new recruits and older ones have learnt their lessons. :) I enjoy lengthy reviews ( love to talk lol), so no worries there. more up soon xoxoxo

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