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| sully2 | 2005.04.30 - 02:33PM | 3: Subtle Strategy | Signed |
| You are such a tease! I know this is a slow seduction, but when??? Author's Response: a while yet for the act itself... other things will "come" first. | |||
| queenp | 2005.04.30 - 02:31PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| OK, chapter was excellent. I enjoyed it, as I always do...Well done, emotionally driving for the reader. I like the tea they shared. I enjoyed the discussion w/Ginny, although I want to know more about that (which you have "promised" to provide.) The murder...I'm not sure if he did it, or just didn't care enough to be concerned w/it. I think he was upset about the slur against Hermione, but I could see him encouraging Lucius to kill him, or suggesting that Voldymutt use Higgs as an example for the cause...But then again, he could have done it, although I think I prefer that he not be the actual murderer, just a witness...
Update again soon, please. I enjoy reading your work...
Author's Response: thanks, queen! I'll have more up with the Ginny bit. Severus was angry with the Hermione slur. I will explain what happened soon. Either way, Higgs wasn't given the chance to learn from his mistakes, but I bet nobody else knows to mess with Hermione. | |||
| Spearsister | 2005.04.30 - 01:37PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| HMM still loving this story I love not knowing which side he's really on. Author's Response: me too! I'm the writer, and I'm still wondering. I'm unsure if I should make him dark until the end, make him out for himself, or make him pretend to be dark. I'm liking the out for himself bit. | |||
| Marajade179 | 2005.04.30 - 12:36PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| You mentioned that Hermione dropped her cup and Snape said that he belived it was because he wanted to kiss her but you never described the actions that would have goten him there. Things like getting out of his chair or leaning over to her. Otherwise very nice story.
Author's Response: oh, well, he was referring to when he almost kissed her in the previous chapter. He is assuming that she's nervous b/c she is either worried it will happen or what have you. I'll go read over again and see if it sounds a little odd, but if not, at least this should clarify that for you. xooxox more up soon | |||
| Alexa Potion | 2005.04.30 - 12:07PM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Hehehe, I had so much fun when I read this chapter, I mean it's a kind of funny when Severus is seducing a little Gryffindor! I wonder where Severus had learnt all his little tricks about seducing? Is it someone who teached this thing to him or did he read them from a book? I don't know will you answer this question but if you do it I would be very very very very very happy! Please tell me?!!! I think that Ron is a really selfish guy, wants Hermione back when he heard that someone else think that Hermione is hot and afraids his mummy's wrath being a big ass!! Hermione don't take him back! Kick in his ass, really HARD!!! About Ginny, yeah, I agree that's really interesting. I would like that she's get our handsome werewolf!! Is Tonks really so slut that she would snog and shag here and there?? I don't think that Severus killed that guy, Voldemort was that one who meant to give the new troops a little performance but he would give for Severus 'a honour' to punish that guy because he insulted Severus' witch!! I can't just wait what Severus is doing for next to Hermion!! Cheers, Southern!!!!! Author's Response: Sneaky!Severus is always fun. I'm thinking that he's just experienced with women and knows mostly what it takes to get what he wants. Ron is being a selfish boy, and in the next chapter, he'll definitely know that it's over for good. There is a plot with gin/tonks/remus/harry that will come out, but everyone will end up with a different mate, most likely. You'll see :) More up soon with Severus' seduction. Cheers | |||
| confuzable | 2005.04.30 - 10:29AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| I'm a little confused about the beginning but other than that I love it. So glad to see Lucius appear. That just makes me oh so happy. Hope Draco doesn't know anything about this seduction, he has trouble keeping his mouth closed sometimes, when he finds it advantageous of course. I like a dark Severus. Author's Response: I intended to sort of trick people with the beginning. That goodness he was only dreaming. That would have been unforgivable, eh? I'll have more up about the opinions of the Malfoys soon. thanks!! | |||
| Maggie | 2005.04.30 - 10:06AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Don't know, with that crew and how they love to torture, he could have just died from it.... Author's Response: true. I'll explain more in the next bit though. thanks! | |||
| cocoachristy | 2005.04.30 - 09:00AM | 4: Getting Comfortable | Signed |
| Hey, Sun, speaking of which, why DID Ginny tell Ron? To make him jealous or is she up to something?
;-) Author's Response: She was taunting him mostly. I'll have that out in the next. Sort of sucky though, huh? | |||
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